Brightclaw
New Warrior
hecking heck I was an edgy [REDACTED] year old
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Post by Brightclaw on Apr 27, 2016 16:41:05 GMT -5
I personally want to punch myself in the face when it comes to warriors. It's like eating ice cream with nails in it, still delicious, but torture to eat. I love it, and the idea of it, but when your honest it has more holes in it than a poorly made dollie. I want to reassemble warriors into something better than a poorly executed good idea, so lets find out all the things that went wrong in warriors, so that we can fix it. If you noticed a mistake or a badly designed character post it here and discuss it with others, so we can find out what was less than great in the warriors series.
DISCLAIMER: I looooooooove warriors, truly, don't think that I don't like it because of this thread. I just want to find out what was fundamentally wrong in the warriors series. Sometimes it isn't good to hero worship your favourite series, you need to look at it with a critical eye, then you truly understand your series
Plot Problems issues with plot
Character Development Problems which characters were less then realistic
Just Plain Issues anything that frusterated you in particular
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Post by 🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄 on May 5, 2016 4:45:32 GMT -5
When Tigerclaw lied about Redtail and Oakfur/whatevsIcan'tremember because RC would of said how he died! It is just a giant plot hole. Even if Bluestar didn't want to hear about how her mate died, the other Clans would of! They would of turned on Tigerclaw. Ravenpaw would still be in the Clan, Spottedleaf would be alive, Even Brokenstar would be alive alot longer if that happened.
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Brightclaw
New Warrior
hecking heck I was an edgy [REDACTED] year old
Posts: 63
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Post by Brightclaw on May 8, 2016 0:41:14 GMT -5
When Tigerclaw lied about Redtail and Oakfur/whatevsIcan'tremember because RC would of said how he died! It is just a giant plot hole. Even if Bluestar didn't want to hear about how her mate died, the other Clans would of! They would of turned on Tigerclaw. Ravenpaw would still be in the Clan, Spottedleaf would be alive, Even Brokenstar would be alive alot longer if that happened. Wow that is true! Almost all of the river clan warriors at the time were there and almost all of them would have witnessed the rockslide, in fact, wouldn't it have been announced at the gathering? That is what they are for aren't they? For that matter, when have the gatherings ever been useful in passing information along, it basically became a meet and greet for friends by the end.
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Post by 🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄 on May 8, 2016 1:29:35 GMT -5
When Tigerclaw lied about Redtail and Oakfur/whatevsIcan'tremember because RC would of said how he died! It is a giant plot hole. Even if Bluestar didn't want to hear about how her mate died, the other Clans would of! They would of turned on Tigerclaw. Ravenpaw would still be in the Clan, Spottedleaf would be alive, Even Brokenstar would be alive alot longer if that happened. Wow that is true! Almost all of the river clan warriors at the time were there and almost all of them would have witnessed the rockslide, in fact, wouldn't it have been announced at the gathering? That is what they are for aren't they? For that matter, when have the gatherings ever been useful in passing information along, it basically became a meet and greet for friends by the end. Yeah, I remember one of the few REAL gatherings, the one where Scourge kill Tigerstar. Firestar yelled the other Clans about his treachery. That was very useful information. And it got passed to all the Clans, that what's a gathering is for. ^.^
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Post by 🍂 Elkpelt 🍂 on May 15, 2016 21:37:50 GMT -5
*Bump* Dovewing was described with three diff eye colors!
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Post by Treeclaw on May 24, 2016 1:30:08 GMT -5
I love the stories but some of the deaths are ridiculous.
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Post by Treeclaw on May 24, 2016 1:30:50 GMT -5
Also, they just kill of characters for the more important ones.
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Brightclaw
New Warrior
hecking heck I was an edgy [REDACTED] year old
Posts: 63
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Post by Brightclaw on May 25, 2016 0:13:31 GMT -5
Glad that we can spawn discussion! I'd like to point out that death was mostly pointless at the end, it became like just permanently moving to a different place
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