Name rater

[maxils]

welcome to my name rater
FORMAT:
cat's name
cat's description
why your cat is named that

EXAMPLE:
Willowfur
brown ticked tabby she-cat with soft fur and blue eyes
named for her soft fur

These ratings are on a scale of 1 to 10. I hope I don't need to explain this anymore.
HOW I RATE:
Smoothness - Does the name go together nicely? Is it smooth, like Shadowsky, or awkward, like Snowwing or, dare I say it, Billystorm? (Bleck!)
Sense - Does it make sense? Can it paint a picture in your head, like Froststorm painting a picture of an ice storm, or does it sound way out there, like Deerfeather or, dare I say it, Hawkfrost? (Bleck!)
Symmetrylessness - Is it redundant? Does it say two different things, like Snowshadow, or does it sound redundant as heck, like Starstar or, dare I say it, Twigbranch? (No bleck, Twig is a cool character)
Synonym for creative that starts with S - Is it creative? Does it sound cute/cool/whatever your preference is, like Torrentwave, or is it extremely bland, unoriginal and boring, like Brownfur or, dare I say it, Whitetail? (Bleck!)

Have fun making names! 

[River to stars]

FORMAT:
Maplespirit
Maple: her pelt colour
Spirit: her enthusiasticness
EXAMPLE:
Deep orange-brown pelt with green eyes and a white muzzle
Maple is a very jumpy cat with a good sense of humor, she is a very good hunter and has a smooth attitude, she doesn't like cats that tease her for her name. In my fan comic this is one of her conversations:
~frame shows Maple crossing the border of FoxClan and her clan BearClan~
~next frame shows Maple bumping into her long-time enemy, Blackpaw, now Blackfur~
Blackfur: "What do you think your doing?"
~Maple hisses getting ready for a pounce~
Maplespirit: "Blackpaw!"
~Blackfur seems to stay calm, licking a front paw~
Blackfur: "ah Maplepaw, dont you know? I'm Blackfur now..."
~Maple sits, clamer~
Maplespirit decides to tease him: "even I thought you'd get a better name.."
~Blackfur is seen to be laying down~
Blackfur: "well your still Maplepaw.."
~Maplespirit is also seen in the same frame with her head up~
Maplespirit: "Nope! I'm Maplespirit now!"
~Black turns around getting up~
Blackfur: "spirit, is that for crossing borders?"
~obviously knowing Maples anger Black gets up his tail high~
Blackfur: "see ya!"
~frame shows Black walking away and Maple with a calm look on her face~

[maxils]

Maplespirit
Smoothness: 8/10
Sense: 10/10
No Redundance: 10/10
Creativity: 10/10
This is an awesome name! I've never heard of it before, and the prefix and suffix are rarely used. It makes sense without sounding redundant. Although it probably wouldn't be used in the books, seeing that we have only one or two cats with that suffix, it's a great name. It fits her perfectly! It's a bit sharp in the middle, but overall, it flows nicely. Solid 95/100, or 38/40.
Also, thank you for the personality example.

[River to stars]

FORMAT:
Rippleclaw
both parts of his name were named because of his twisted claw
EXAMPLE:
blue-grey tabby with blue eyes and a twisted claw
Ripple is an ambitious and trouble-making, he will not hesitate to try and get what he wants

[maxils]

Rippleclaw
Smoothness: 10/10
Sense: 10/10
No Redundance: 10/10
Creativity: 4/10
Rippleclaw has been used in canon, and it has the -claw suffix, which is quite overused. As of July 15, 2017, it's the seventh most common canon Warriors suffix, with 20 canon uses (not even a third as common as -tail, but close). However, everything else is great!
85/100.

[River to stars]

FORMAT:
Falcon that Soars over Mountains (Falcon)
Falcon was named for his fluffy brown and grey pelt
EXAMPLE:
Fluffy brown fur and a grey underbelly.

(hope this gives you a challenge )

[maxils]

Hmm!
It's a tribe name, so I can pretty much eliminate the sense part. And the redundancy. Both 10/10.
Creativity: 10/10
Smoothness: 10/10
Perfect!

[maxils]

I don't think you quite understand the actual format, though:

Name: Shadowsky
Desc: Long-furred, void-black tom sans tabby markings and white with blue eyes
Name reason: Named for his love of sleeping in high places and his ability to speak with StarClan like they're normal cats, and because he used to be a loner by the name of Shadow; before that, taken in by a kittypet named Lizzie aster his CLAN-BORN parents died in an earthquake, and he was named Shadow by Lizzie because of his void-black fur

[River to stars]

Well you didn't put that form there so how did I know to do it like that?
You cant just expect people to read your mind
Also you double-posted

[maxils]

One, there is no rule against double posting.
Two, I fixed it. Happy now?

[River to stars]

cat's name: Runningstream
cat's description: Mottled grey-blue tabby she-cat with clear green eyes
why your cat is named that: Running: Because she was the first to get up on her four paws and run.
Stream: Her pelt resembles the colour of a stream
CLANS WATCH OUT FOR STREAMS THAT GREW LEGS AND RAN AWAY

[maxils]

Smooth: 9/10
Sense: 7/10
Creative: 10/10
No Redundance: 10/10

Nice! Running- and -stream aren't used that often, so it's cool to see them put together, but the reasoning could be a bit better. Normally, kits are named shortly after birth, and the prefix of their name normally indicates appearance. Had the reasoning been different, I'd probably have given an 11/10 for sense.
OVERALL: 90/100

[Hollywing the]

Pebblepelt

Light gray tabby she-cat with white paws and blue eyes

"Pebble" - She was the smallest of the litter, and it was also after her pelt.
"pelt" - To emphasize the second reason of the prefix.

[maxils]

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also plz click untoldtales.proboards.com/thread/34764/create-cyoa-based-stories-write


Smooth: 9. I really like how the prefix and suffix start with the same letter.
Sense: 10. This makes a lot of sense to me, but imagine if this was taken literally! XD
Creativity: 6. The suffix -pelt is one of the most commonly used suffixes.
No Redundance: 9. Although I like the prefix abd suffix having matching first letters, they have matching first two letters, which knocks off a point.
Overall: 85%

[Hollywing the]

Oakfrost

lithe dark brown tom with blue eyes

"Oak" - fur color resembles that of a tree. In addition, his father wanted him to be strong.
"-frost" - he chose his own suffix, after the leaf-bare that his parents had fought bravely through before dying. He claims that it is in their honor. However, he is quite the opposite of a cold cat.