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Post by Crowstorm on Mar 30, 2019 9:16:43 GMT -5
Hi! Please don't take this as an insult! I also might have spelling errors ..--==Updates (Rouge Edition)==--.. 1: More room for rouge clans - Playing as a rouge, every time I go somewhere clans try to attack me. Add a good Clan Spot in the map. 2: Alliances with rouge clans - You should talk to a clan leader when going into camp, instead of being injured you could talk to the leader and make an ally! 3: Medicine Cats For rouge clans - It's very annoying when another clan attacks you and you die. Please Add a medicine cat. For example, instead of prey on the moss, it should be herb(s)! ..--== Updates For Rouges AND Can Cats ==--.. 1- Territory map layover - There should be a button to see territories, And rouges should get room too (For rouges there would be either a battle against a clan for territory, More room, OR a button to mark your territory. 2- Info at gatherings - You should know who died, are there any new kits, and new clan info. 3- Battles for reasons - I have walked into a battle or two while looking for things. it would be cool to have boarder battles, etc. ..--== Updates For Clan Cats ==--.. 1- Beds - it's kinda boring to stay up all night, you can't see! 2- Kit to warrior - It would be AMAZING to have a choice to start as a kit, or skip to be a warrior 3- Boarder Patrol Bye!!
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Post by 🌹Jayjaycats🌹 on Mar 30, 2019 19:17:34 GMT -5
Those are really cool ideas!
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Post by maxils on Mar 31, 2019 12:05:57 GMT -5
Nice, but there are a couple of flaws. 1. You CAN sleep. There are moss beds to sleep on. 2. Cattails exists. BTW, there were more grammar errors (excluding spelling errors) than spelling errors. (SPELLING: ~3. GRAMMAR: at least 4.) Sure the one mistake with 'Can Cats' was a pure mistake instead of you actually thinking that that's the spelling, though.
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Post by Autumnfall on Apr 10, 2019 13:24:37 GMT -5
Its to bad that Falconstar is so into Cattails.
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