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Post by jaymoon on Jan 4, 2020 12:43:59 GMT -5
Chapter 1
"Please you can't exile me, I've worked so hard" Smokefoot said.
"I'm sorry but you keep going into battle and attacking your clan mates because you don't know what they look like." Rotstar said "You almost killed nettlepelt yesterday!" Smokefoot was silent. Rotstar continued "And your hunting skills are terrible, You could't even catch that slow and fat thrush this morning. You aren't useful to the clan" Smokefoot turned to his mate Leafsong and asked "please if i'm being exiled can you come with me? We can raise kits in our own clan!" Leafsong looked at him with sad eyes. "I-I cant. our kits need to be raised in ShadowClan. And my loyalty is with ShadowClan I just can't leave" Smokefoot looked at her with sorrrow in his eyes. "Please, Someone? I cant be alone" Ashwhisker looked at him and yowled "When did you care for us, nettlepelt could've died because of you!! Get Out!!" Smokefoot looked around and then left.
Smokefoot looked around and ran to the four trees. He saw a Brown tabby tom and said "Hello I'm Smokefoot." The tom was startled at first but at last he spoke "I'm Tune I'm The trainer here" Smokefoot thought for a second, Should he get better at hunting or fighting, or even killing to get revenge. "I dont know"
A. Hunting
B. Fighting
C. Killing for revenge
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2020 22:48:11 GMT -5
C That's what I do
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Post by jaymoon on Jan 9, 2020 17:15:48 GMT -5
Chapter 2
Smokefoot said "I want killing bite" Tune look startled at first but then replied "sure" They Trained for hours until Smokefoot was to exhausted to walk. "That's all for now, come back later" Tune said. Then he went to go hunt because he was starving, at the end of the day he only got one mouse, he ate it wishing he was still in ShadowClan. The thought of ShadowClan made him angry, his kits would grow up without their father. He set down his bedding and slept.
The next morning he tried to hunt again and caught a wounded rabbit. "I wish I was better at hunting..." he said quietly to himself. But for now he wanted Revenge. He grabbed some Brambles and started making Thicket walls. He was resting and then he thought to himself, "what do I do now, I have nothing"
A. Focus on revenge B. Try to get better at hunting C. Try to get cats into his camp
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Post by Deleted on Jan 9, 2020 21:11:23 GMT -5
B
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Post by River to stars on Jan 10, 2020 3:55:30 GMT -5
~I am the one River To Stars~ A
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Post by jaymoon on Feb 22, 2020 14:43:08 GMT -5
Chapter 3
Smokefoot ran to Tune "I need help with hunting" he said "please." Tune stopped what he was doing and turned to him "sure, I need to just put this in a hole." He dug up a hole and put a leaf in there. Tune showed him the hunting crouch, and how he has to be patient. By the end of the day Smokefoot caught two mice, and a shrew. "Thank you" he said to Tune and he ran back to his camp. He ran to his den and ate a mouse. He found some Brambles and started building, and after a while he had two dens. He couldn't decide what to do from there
A. try to get cats into the camp B. keep building the camp C. Try to get Tune to join him
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Post by River to stars on Feb 22, 2020 18:02:34 GMT -5
~I am the one River To Stars~ A and C? Perhaps he gets Tune to join then he asks Tune to find cats to join them
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Post by jaymoon on Feb 22, 2020 18:18:36 GMT -5
Chapter 4
Smokefoot woke up the next morning and felt lonely, he was used to having a clan with him. He wanted some cats to join him so maybe they could create a clan. He wanted someone he could trust, but he didn't trust many cats. He decided to talk to Tune, who he talked to so often, he calls him a friend. He went to Tune and Tune sighed "You come here every day, Smokefoot" he said. Smokefoot looked at his paws "Sorry... Anyways. Could you join me, In my camp?" He asked. Tune paused "Sure" he said. And they walked to the camp. Smokefoot showed him the extra den, "that's your den" he said. Tune walked up to it and layed inside. "so what is my purpose" Tune asked. "can you ask people to join the clan?" Smokefoot asked. "yes" Tune said "I know three cats that could join. But we only have room for one" he said "we have Blossom, Thorn, and Echo"
Skills out of 10 A. Blossom, hunting:9 Fighting:1 healing:0 B. Thorn, Hunting:2 Fighting:9 healing:0.2 C. Echo Hunting:1 Fighting:0 healing:8.5
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Post by River to stars on Feb 23, 2020 2:41:42 GMT -5
~I am the one River To Stars~ B
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Post by jaymoon on Feb 23, 2020 11:21:31 GMT -5
Chapter 5
"Thorn" he said. "hes good at fighting, and I want revenge because ShadowClan did this to me." Tune nodded and ran off. He came back an hour later with a dark brown tom. "This is Thorn" Tune said. "hello" Thorn said to Smokefoot. Smokefoot dipped his head in greeting "hello." He said, "let me show you to your den, you will be sharing it with Tune" Smokefoot took Thorn to his den and Thorn looked unimpressed "This small space is where I will be sleeping." He said. "If you want a bigger den, then we need to collect brambles, and I will let you sleep in my den until the warrior den gets bigger" Smokefoot said. They collected the Brambles and made thickets. "for now we need to protect the camp with these brambles" Smokefoot said. They carefully placed it around camp and It turned dark, "Thorn, could you guard the camp for tonight" Smokefoot asked. "Fine" he said and he sat outside the camp. "but only for half the night" Smokefoot agreed and he went to the warrior's den and lay next to Tune. He fell asleep beside him, purring.
2 questions should Smokefoot fall in love with Tune A. yes B. No
Is Thorn evil A. yes B. no
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Post by ~Goldensplash~ on Feb 23, 2020 12:34:29 GMT -5
hmmm drama could happen here
I'd say A and B.
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Post by I don’t know what I’m doing on Feb 23, 2020 13:35:39 GMT -5
A and A because I love drama and maybe add the twist of thorn liking tune too.
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Post by ~Goldensplash~ on Feb 23, 2020 14:02:24 GMT -5
ooh, yes!
A and A with Thorn liking Tune as well.
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Post by River to stars on Feb 25, 2020 2:30:28 GMT -5
~I am the one River To Stars~ A and A Thorn should betray Smokefoot and attempt to kill Smokefoot in his sleep because he wants to be leader
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Post by jaymoon on Feb 29, 2020 20:57:23 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Smokefoot was asleep next to Tune. He was purring, a few moments later Thorn padded up, "Wake up. it's your turn to guard the camp" he growled. Smokefoot got up and turned to Tune, who was still asleep and purring. Smokefoot blushed and then he walked away. He walked to the entrance, and thorn walked over to Smokefoot's den, since he was given permission the night before. Smokefoot sat down and Tune woke up and walked over to Smokefoot and sat next to him. "let me keep watch with you" He said. A few hour later Thorn padded off "I'm going hunting" he muttered. Later that day Thorn came back with one mouse and a scrawny shrew. "Was he even hunting?" Tune whispered to Smokefoot. "You said he was bad at hunting" He replied "he could've had bad luck" Tune eyed thorn suspiciously "yeah" he said "Maybe"
What was Thorn doing A. Visiting Evil Rouges B. visiting and evil RiverClan warrior C. Telling Shadowclan about the camp D. Just had bad luck hunting
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