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Post by 🌼 Sprucetail 🌼 on Oct 2, 2017 17:47:20 GMT -5
Emberlight closed her eyes with her tail around the pup. She fell asleep as the small pup's warmth flowed into her.
Gorseclaw saw his sister curled around the pup. He hissed quietly and dug his claws into the ground.
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Post by Moonstar on Oct 2, 2017 19:35:19 GMT -5
Flamingheart walked into camp after a long solo hunt, carrying two squirrels by their tails into camp. she dropped them and gasped in surprise at the sight of the puppy. "wha... what iS THAT" she yowled. Staring in horror at the puppy.
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Post by The Angry Unicorn on Oct 2, 2017 19:43:56 GMT -5
Ravenfeather ears flicked as he heard an she-cat yowl in terror ( superman ), "Puppies." He replied, making his way to the she-cat to calm herself, before long, she might even scare the puppy to death.
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Post by Moonstar on Oct 2, 2017 19:54:25 GMT -5
Flamingheart walked up to wavestar "what IS THAT." she said IS THAT A, A DOG!" She sank her claws into the ground, confused and afraid for her clanmates' saftey
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Post by The Angry Unicorn on Oct 2, 2017 19:55:20 GMT -5
"Flamingheart," Ravenfeather growls, chasing after her. "Calm down."
( hello )
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Post by Moonstar on Oct 2, 2017 20:02:39 GMT -5
"Well MAYBE, JUST MAYBE if SOMEONE were to TELL ME what's going on I wouldn't be so WORRIED about THE DOG IN THE CAMP!!!! " she hissed at him.
[(( No offence Shinefly It's just Flamingheart))]
{ HI XD }
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Post by The Angry Unicorn on Oct 2, 2017 20:07:50 GMT -5
(? sorry? xD i wrote flamingheart )
"That is no excuse to go shouting at the leader." Ravenfeather hissed back, but calmed down. "We found it during our patrols and... the clan decided to keep it." He finished the last sentence rather painfully, he still doesn't trust the dog
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Post by 🌼 Sprucetail 🌼 on Oct 2, 2017 20:10:19 GMT -5
Emberlight heard the yelling. She nosed Cherrykit's head and padded out. "Flamingheart. Wavestar and I decided she could stay. How can you know she won't learn?"
(She's about a week old. Puppies don't open their eyes until 1-2 weeks)
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Post by cr0wt00th on Oct 2, 2017 20:21:05 GMT -5
(I'm sorry, but Flamingheart sounds a bit Mary Sue-ish. Toms having a crush on her for no reason? Being above average at battle? I know it's not my place to critisize - even though criticism should always be accepted - but I just don't know how she got accepted.)
Frostclaw Frostclaw heard yowling from Flamingheart. She stormed out of the medicine den and over to the she-cat.
"This pup is without a mother and home," she hissed. "I've been through this with Ravenfeather, but I won't hesitate to argue all day. This dog will grow up in this Clan until it shows plenty of signs that it doesn't fit in with our lifestyle. Is that clear?"
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Post by The Angry Unicorn on Oct 2, 2017 20:32:03 GMT -5
( i did not see the personality trait but oh, Well I don't think ravenfeather is into any she cats yet xD ))
Ravenfeather was glad that Frostclaw is on his side, he only wish he didn't mention his name. "The fact is, we can't change what had been done."
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Post by 🐾Wavestar🐾 on Oct 2, 2017 21:37:50 GMT -5
Err, Moonstar, can you change your strengths? I agree that your cat sounds a bit Mary-Sue-ish...)
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Post by OlivertheOblivion on Oct 2, 2017 22:52:03 GMT -5
(( in honor of CHERRYSTEM=DA PINK CAT leaving the forums, I will submit this cat that is basically a mirror image of her XD I will attempt to copy her as much as possibleUsername: vinekit Cat Name: Cherrypaw (soon to be Cherrystem) Age: 6 moons Rank: apprentice Description (please give a detailed one): A pinkish white she-cat (if not pinkish then tan or creamish) with light blue eyes and a fluffy tail, Personality: She is the loudest, most obnoxious she-cat in the clan. She is irksome in a way and all up in other people's business. She doesn't take insults to heart, in fact she's kind of oblivious to them. She is rather annoying to the point where a cat would scratch their ears off or face plant into a puddle of mud. Anything to get her to shut up XD Skills: she is a very skilled fighter Flaws: VERY easily distracted, which makes it difficult to train her XD Mate/Crush (please specify): n/a but open Kits: n/a Family: her mother was named Rosepatch, her father was a rouge named Torneye. Both parents' whereabouts are unknown. Backstory (optional): she was clanborn, but her mother had a secret relationship with a rouge tom. she covered up the father's identity by claiming Brackenwhisker, a warrior at the time, was the father until he died in battle. The only one who knew her mother's secret was the former medicine cat before Frostclaw. Other: she can be ditsy often times. For CHERRYSTEM=DA PINK CAT ;w;
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Post by primrosestar on Oct 3, 2017 1:38:31 GMT -5
(Yeah, and I noticed something with flamingheart - she's 10 moons old and a warrior. 10 moons old is only about a mid-apprentice age, and personally the earliest we've seen a cat in the clans get a warrior name was fireheart and he was 12 moons.) Deepsea stalked over to flamingheart. "Would you shut up?" He hissed quietly in his ear. "They've decided it's staying and although only a few people are happy about that decision... we have to keep it in our camp because /wavestar/ says so."
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Post by The Angry Unicorn on Oct 3, 2017 1:45:35 GMT -5
Ravenfeather narrowed his eyes, he obviously disapproves of the dog staying, but neither would he challenge the leader. But he said nothing
( now i know why firepaw is op )
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Post by 🐾Wavestar🐾 on Oct 3, 2017 8:15:28 GMT -5
Accepted!)
Time: Night. Warm, but dark.
"What's that racket about?" Wavestar's voice sounded from the top of the StoneLedge. The cats milled around and seems to be arguing about the new pup. "I'll go to the ShineRock tonight, and see if StarClan approved my choice, until then, Emberlight, take charge to the camp while I am gone. Stoneheart, follow me, you are a new Warrior, and it's your time to visit the ShineRock."
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