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Post by Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ on Dec 10, 2017 15:19:13 GMT -5
-- So basically as the title says. Just post any art on here and I'll try to critique it. I'll do best withcats Okay withwolves dogs humans nature scenes nekos, kitsunes, etc foxes mlp style ponies dragons (actually, idk about this one. I might be able to do a bit) any feline, canines, anything like that No. Just don't post any art that is ofhorses (more realistic no mlp) robots vehicles weapons architecture HANDS Types of art that I'll critiqueanimation pixel art fanart (read below for more info about this though) references covers icons graphics I won't dopottery, ceramics, mosaics, etc tattoo work (i really shouldn't be adding this but) logos any literature photography yes i'll be doing both traditional and digital, HOWEVER, for traditional, make sure the lighting is good enoughWell basically you get the point. If anything isn't listed on here that you want me to critique, just post it and i'll try my best to critique it also, please no fanart unless if it's from warriors, wings of fire, yuri on ice, kuroshitsuji, just because i won't know how the character looks, acts, etc so it'll be harder for me to judge for the art that i said no to, you CAN post it, but just be warned that my critique won't be that good. btw, if you just want help with shading, I can just give you tips. also with lineart, sketches, and coloring. and if you need any help with paint tool sai, i might be able to help
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Post by RainbowTheAlbinoServal on Dec 11, 2017 3:46:36 GMT -5
My Azure howl oc, but I forgot hair I want style crit, and this is partly a ref (rest in pieces original art)
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Post by Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ on Dec 11, 2017 10:51:50 GMT -5
-- Okay so I did style critique but this is just based on mine and if you feel like you prefer yours over what i gave you go ahead and keep it c: so basically, if I drew a wolf, it'd be much skinnier than yours. also, the paws are less round (if you get what I mean) the tail is more floofy and curved for fur, there's a ton of ways to do it and I'm not going to force you to do one style. I'm just giving you the way that I do it so just take it if you like it. Same thing for eyes
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Post by RainbowTheAlbinoServal on Dec 11, 2017 19:33:17 GMT -5
Hmm... The face.. Yeah. I need some help on anatomy there. And the legs at the front too. This was some weeks ago and I improved drastically... Might take a picture of the more recent art of her.
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Post by Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ on Dec 11, 2017 20:17:30 GMT -5
-- It's just that the muzzle's a bit too skinny and too long. It's actually not that bad though. I liked how you shaped the body c: I think it's better than mine And the legs, paws, and tail are okay it's just that i'm giving you my style. oh cool! I'd like to see how much you've improved ^^
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Post by RainbowTheAlbinoServal on Dec 11, 2017 21:23:13 GMT -5
Wait wait look look! I need you to crit the anatomy. This was also weeks ago, and the redraw wasn't that good and was ruined. The only dragon type I've mastered, my own original species apparently.
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Post by Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ on Dec 12, 2017 13:04:13 GMT -5
-- So basically Honestly, I'm not that good with dragons. I can tell you the basics but if you want to learn how to draw scales, search up a tutorial. i can't help you with anything more advanced than basic anatomy. I can't even draw the arms rip anyways, the thing that looked the most out of shape was the arms. the joints aren't supposed to be that high up. Also, they were kind of big. But some of this stuff doesn't apply if it's a different kind of dragon than the ones that i usually see.
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Post by RainbowTheAlbinoServal on Dec 12, 2017 19:36:04 GMT -5
One word: Wing arms, and feathered wing. Well, if you do actually know Flight rising, it's a sub-breed. Of wildclaws. I'm not so sure on scaled dragons yet so I only draw those. Furred dragon-cats. Fluffy? Although the scales looks like it would be useful for me if I draw my other dragon ocs in the future.
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Post by Ginger on Dec 12, 2017 19:55:16 GMT -5
critique these? : > (some sort of mlp like style) anatomy? (cat) more anatomy? (another cat) sOME MORE? Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ (for a slightly fast reply i guess)
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Post by RainbowTheAlbinoServal on Dec 12, 2017 20:11:00 GMT -5
Hey look, art style crit again please Anatomy crit please
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Post by Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ on Dec 14, 2017 16:48:44 GMT -5
critique these? : > (some sort of mlp like style) anatomy? (cat) more anatomy? (another cat) sOME MORE? Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ (for a slightly fast reply i guess)
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Post by Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ on Dec 14, 2017 17:00:00 GMT -5
Hey look, art style crit again please Anatomy crit please -- I'm just going to assume that style critique is anatomy critique from now on because there really shouldn't be a certain style that you should have. Everyone develops their own style later on
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Post by Ginger wants to art on Dec 14, 2017 20:36:05 GMT -5
critique these? : > (some sort of mlp like style) anatomy? (cat) more anatomy? (another cat) sOME MORE? Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ (for a slightly fast reply i guess) 1st: i just wanted like anatomy tips not style tips.. it's meant to be sort of mlp like but also horse like i despise the thick hooves 2nd: I actually stink at doing specific positions of wings, and you're not really helpful with that also the cat legs are correct p s s h h h hh h h hh that was an older style ;u; i also study cat... anatomy... alot.... YES THOSE ARE FEATHERS 3rd: this cat is 100% old trash stuff.. I colored it recently for a game I'm making on a scratch, my anatomy right now is way better (that was like from 5 months ago LOL) ignore what i said up there i like saying things for absolutely no reason i haven't arted lately for some reason
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Post by Ƭнє Ɗяєαмєя ✧ on Dec 14, 2017 21:16:15 GMT -5
-- well if you wanted horse stuff, i already said that i can't critique horses so yaaa welp i've never drawn wings that much so yeah i probably can't help with that Umm... they actually are shorter than the way you've drawn them oh yay i got that right c: sorry if i offended you in any way... i didn't mean to
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Post by RainbowTheAlbinoServal on Dec 14, 2017 22:36:51 GMT -5
YES, THE WINGS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE SMALL She is fluffy I take Renightma's crits tho.
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