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Post by ~Dust/Jayden on Jul 4, 2018 4:19:23 GMT -5
(I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this.Feel free to move the thread ✞~Spottedleaf ~✞ ) Hellow,Its Dustclaw! Yes I animate,but I'm just learning it..Here are some animations, maybe some random drawings too idk.Sorry if they're huge,I don't know how to put spoilers  This was supposed to be my new avatar,dew it way too big   |
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Post by ~Dust/Jayden on Jul 11, 2018 11:33:36 GMT -5
A new animation that is very random...and huge  |
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Post by cr0wt00th on Jul 11, 2018 21:20:10 GMT -5
Criticism below. Don't click if you're an easily offended ten year old. You're right, they are pretty bad. You left white lines in some places, and it literally looked like you used the paint-bucket tool on MS Paint to color it in. You seriously couldn't just enlarge the brush and fill it in that way? This is extremely lazy imo. The anatomy is completely wrong, as each ear is about the size of the creature's entire face. The eyes on the first one aren't even colored in all the way. Also on the first, the creature leaves behind previously mentioned white lines when it even slightly moves.
And what is even going on in the second one? It just looks like it's being locked up in a prison and then drowned. ~Dust/Jayden, if you care to improve your art ^ |
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Post by ~Dust/Jayden on Jul 12, 2018 1:22:45 GMT -5
Yeah I know,I am very lazy.I was doing these in like half an hour..I probably should have put more effort into them.And yeah... I don't even know what is going on in the second one As I said,very random lol.About my anatomy..I know it's very off,but in the moment that's kinda just my art style.I'm trying to improve though. Thanks for the criticism cr0wt00th  |
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Post by cr0wt00th on Jul 12, 2018 17:05:48 GMT -5
You're welcome! Now I realize I may have been a bit rude, as yesterday was a terrible day for me. I hope you weren't offended. You really do show potential.
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Post by kuraikage11 on Aug 9, 2018 20:15:14 GMT -5
Heh, good job! ^^ I'm pretty bad at animating so your's is better compared to mine!
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Post by ~Dust/Jayden on Aug 10, 2018 3:19:15 GMT -5
Thanks  But I bet yours are great too |
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Post by ~Dust/Jayden on Aug 12, 2018 3:58:34 GMT -5
Aaaaand.... another animation ! Yay? At least there are no white lines anymore.(And its not huge)  |
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Post by cr0wt00th on Aug 13, 2018 6:14:36 GMT -5
Definitely an improvement, but you still have far to go. Good job. ^^
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Post by ~Dust/Jayden on Aug 13, 2018 11:45:30 GMT -5
Thanks |
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Post by 🌼 Sprucetail 🌼 on Sept 11, 2018 12:39:31 GMT -5
I second what gamer said ^-^
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But I bet yours are great too 
