Post by I don’t know what I’m doing on Feb 1, 2021 10:23:50 GMT -5
This is a very good fan fiction! Nice work!
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99% of people think all pitbulls are mean, killer dogs. If you are the 1% that would stand up for them, copy this into your signature. (This is made by Radiant Rainbows)
Post by Shadowrunner on Feb 2, 2021 18:20:16 GMT -5
thanks :3 I've done a lot of practice and my mom makes fanfics for a game she plays and lets me read some of them so i kinda know how to make them XD I have some other ones that aren't warriors related (although are still from the pov of animals) I might put them in the off-topic fiction thing :/... imma go do that now XD
Post by I don’t know what I’m doing on Feb 2, 2021 18:35:37 GMT -5
Cool!
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99% of people think all pitbulls are mean, killer dogs. If you are the 1% that would stand up for them, copy this into your signature. (This is made by Radiant Rainbows)
99% of people think all pitbulls are mean, killer dogs. If you are the 1% that would stand up for them, copy this into your signature. (This is made by Radiant Rainbows)
Post by Shadowrunner on Feb 3, 2021 18:03:54 GMT -5
Lunastar’s Tale allegiances
Thunderclan Leader:Skystar, a white she-cat with golden eyes Deputy: Preyheart. A gray blue tom with yellow eyes Medicine cat: Cloudleaf, a brown-red she-cat with blue eyes. Apprentice: Snowheart Apprentices: Snowheart, a white she-cat with amber eyes, medicine cat apprentice Mousepaw, a gray she-cat with blue eyes Finchpaw, an orange tabby-tom with blue eyes Hazelpaw, an orange, brown and white tortoiseshell with hazel colored eyes Warriors Roseheart, a calico she-cat with blue eyes Dragonsoul, a pinkish tom who’s blind but has excellent hearing, orange eyes. Frostwillow, a gray she-cat with orange eyes Greystorm, a grey tom with blue eyes Shadowclaw, a black tom with ice blue eyes, secretly half bloodclan Treefall, a brown tom with amber eyes Elders Nightfeather, black she-cat with yellow eyes Queens Shinefur, a golden she-cat with blue eyes, mother to Bramblekit a brown tabby tom with amber eyes (haha get it) and Longkit, a gray she-cat with golden eyes Shadowrunner, a dark brown tabby she-cat with black splotches scattered across her pelt and one black ear and paw, mother to Fangkit, a black tom with amber eyes, white splotches across his pelt, Hawkkit, who looks just like Shadowrunner, has ice blue eyes. And Tinykit, much smaller than her brothers, a pure black she-kit with one amber eye and one ice blue eye. Shadowclan Leader: Rotstar black tom with amber eyes Deputy: Jaggedtooth, sand colored tom with blue eyes Medicine cat: Scarfur, red-brown tom with green eyes, apprentice tatteredpelt Apprentices Tatteredpelt, white she-cat with green eyes, medicine cat apprentice Rockpaw, Black she-cat with green eyes Bonepaw, white tom with blue eyes Crowpaw, ginger tom with amber eyes Dustpaw, dark gray she-cat with pale green eyes Bitepaw, orange tabby tom with blue eyes Warriors Palefrond, blue-gray she-cat with orange eyes Beakclaw, black tom with blue eyes Shadefur, dark blue-gray tom with amber eyes Elders Banewhisker, silver tom with big blue eyes Queens Tornfeather, light gray she cat, mother to Duskkit, a black tom with white paws and belly, and Thornkit, a light gray she-cat. Windclan Leader: Proudstar, sandy tom with amber eyes Deputy: Tanglefur, ginger tom with brown eyes Medicine cat: Lightheart, silver she-cat with blue eyes, apprentice: spotridge Apprentices Spotridge, golden she-cat with green eyes, medicine cat apprentice Windpaw, Gray she cat with grey eyes Thrushpaw, white tom with amber eyes Cheetahpaw, orange she-cat with cheetah-like markings, green eyes. Warriors Swiftleap, silver tom with amber eyes Leapfur, black she-cat with blue eyes Darky, white tom with a darker gray tail and paws, blue eyes. Formerly a loner. Breezefoot, white with green eyes. Queens Riftclaw, ginger she-cat with gray eyes, mother to Burrkit, a white tom with gray eyes, and Jumpkit, a she-kit with amber eyes
Riverclan Leader: Clearstar, a blue-gray she-cat with amber eyes Deputy: Coldfur, a black tom with green eyes Medicine cat: Willowfur, a golden tabby she cat with green eyes, apprentice: Mousepounce Apprentices Mousepounce, silver she-cat with blue eyes, medicine cat apprentice Shinepaw, a ginger she-cat with gray eyes Fishpaw, a silver tom with blue eyes Hillpaw, a brown tabby tom with green eyes Warriors Pebblelake, a white tom with blue eyes, dark gray tail and paws Thrushear, a white she-cat with amber eyes Jadepelt, dark blue-gray she-cat with green eyes Silverstone, silver tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Elders Hawkclaw, brown tabby tom with amber eyes Queens: Streamtail, golden she-cat with amber eyes, mother to Stonekit, a white tom with blue eyes, and Gleamkit, a blue-gray she-kit with amber eyes (actually Clearstar’s kit but only Streamtail and Willowfur know)
Stormclan Leader: Lunastar, brown tabby she-cat with dark blue eyes Deputy: Feathertail, white she-cat with green eyes Medicine cat: Crystalpool, a blue gray she-cat with amber eyes. Apprentice: Crowwing Apprentices Crowwing, a mottled gray tabby tom with gold eyes Wavepaw, a red-brown tom with warm amber eyes Stormpaw, a dark gray tabby tom with dark blue eyes Fangpaw, blue gray tabby she-cat with pale blue eyes Warriors Leopardfur, golden she-cat with brown spots scattered across her fur, with yellow eyes Thornclaw, orange tabby tom, with bright green eyes Goldenstream, a golden she-cat with white ears and amber eyes Graystripe, a dark bray tabby tom with black paws, with one green eye and one amber eye Thrushtail, orange tabby tom with black stripes, like a tiger, green eyes with flecks of gold Elders Ashdawn, a black tom with mottled gray spots, white paws, and pale yellow eyes Goldensplash, a sand colored tabby she-cat with golden-brown paws and hazel eyes Queens Sparrowfur, a gray she-cat with blue eyes, mother to Lavenderkit, a brown tabby she-cat with white paws and hazel eyes. Tigerkit, who looks like his father thrushtail, but with golden eyes. And Stripekit, an orange tabby tom with dark amber eyes. Eaglefall, a white she-cat with golden eyes, mother to Thornclaw’s kits, thrushkit, a brown tom with blue eyes, Eaglekit, a white she-kit like her mother, but with black paws and dark gray eyes, and Daisykit, a hazel she-kit with green eyes.
credit goes to my friend for making Shadowclaw, and the names Ashdawn and Goldensplash
Post by Shadowrunner on Feb 3, 2021 18:41:12 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Lunastar sat up in her den, she sniffed the air, it was beginning to get warmer and leaf-bare was coming to an end, it had been a good leaf-bare and prey had still run well. She turned her head to see Tune lying next to her, still asleep. Lunastar had made Tune sleep in her den to make sure Shadowclan didn’t sneak into camp and try to take him away while everyone slept. She got up and walked out of the den, the sun was just beginning to rise and the camp was starting to wake up. She stretched, and then walked over to Feathertail, her deputy. “Hi Feathertail” she said cheerily “I’d like to go on the dawn patrol and check how our new territory is doing”, Feathertail replied calmly “yes Lunastar, I’ll go gather the others to do it with you” and she padded away. Lunastar sat down by the entrance to the camp waiting, Many of the cats were awake now and had begun chatting together. Soon, Feathertail came walking back with some cats behind her, and Lunastar recognized each of them. Goldenstream and her apprentice Fangpaw followed her, along with Thrushtail. Lunastar nodded to Feathertail thankfully, and she walked away. Fangpaw seemed excited, which made sense, since he was going on a patrol with his clan’s leader.
The patrol continued, and everything seemed fine, they remarked the borders and had no trouble. At least, not until they reached the border they shared with Windclan. Lunastar sniffed the air, and smelled Windclan cats on her territory. She lifted her tail, signaling her patrol to be quiet, and they noticed the smell too. “We know you’re there, come out” Lunastar hissed, her tail beginning to fluff up. And a windclan patrol came out from a bush. She recognized these cats, they were Darky, Thrushpaw, and Breezefoot. Darky spoke first, “This is interesting, Stormclans leader on patrol” he said, calmly. “What are you doing on our territory” Goldenstream hissed, Fangpaw looked ready to fight. “Oh we’re simply concerned. Our leader Proudstar simply handed over his territory, no question about it. And I mean from a cat named PROUDstar, that’s not very proud of him” Breezefoot said matter-of-factly, as if she was trying to annoy them, which she probably was. Darky groaned at Breezefoots joke, then continued “You see, there have ALWAYS been 4 clans in the forest, and as we see it, that shouldn’t change anytime soon” he hissed then leaped on top of Goldenstream, a battle was breaking out.
These cats were strong, they had fought for longer than stormclan had and knew more about battling than them. Tune had given Lunastars warriors some tips about fighting the other clans, but they hadn’t gotten as much training as Lunastar herself. She hissed to Fangpaw “go get help, tell Feathertail whats happening and she’ll send you with some cats” and Fangpaw ran away to follow her orders. Lunastar jumped on Thrushpaw, who was beginning to chase after Fangpaw, so that the apprentice could get away. She raked her claws along Thrushpaws side before he threw her off. Thrushpaw jumped back on top of her and almost sank his teeth into her throat, but she twisted her head in time to avoid it. She rolled over so that he was under her and raked her claws across his belly, then let him go so he could run away. Lunastar heard a screech and turned her head to see Darky on top of Goldenstream practically clawing her pelt off, Lunastar ran at him and threw him off Goldenstream. She ran around to be behind him then clawed at his ears, and raked her claws across his side. Suddenly, Breezefoot jumped on top of Lunastar, and she heard the scream of Goldenstream and Thrushtail being jumped on top of too. Lunastar twisted her head to see more cats, Thrushpaw had gone to get back up! But surely Proudstar wouldn’t allow him to do that when they were the ones who crossed the border, Thrushpaw must have changed the story to make it sound like Stormclan crossed the border instead! Lunastar struggled under the weight of Breezefoot, the she-cat was larger than her and felt like she weighed as much as one of the great oaks at fourtrees! A yowl broke through the air and the weight was lifted off of Lunastar. Fangpaw had gotten back up! As the warriors fought they chased Windclan out of their territory, and sat down to rest for a moment. Suddenly a wail broke the now still air, it was Fangpaw! Lunastar turned her head to see him standing over Goldenstream. Lunastar got up and bolted toward the golden she-cat, her pelt now stained with blood, and saw her eyes had glazed over, and her sides weren’t moving. “Sh-she’s dead” Lunastar whispered, falling to her knees, how could she let this happen? The first death of Stormclan, and it certainly wouldn’t be the last.
Post by I don’t know what I’m doing on Feb 3, 2021 19:56:20 GMT -5
Noice
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99% of people think all pitbulls are mean, killer dogs. If you are the 1% that would stand up for them, copy this into your signature. (This is made by Radiant Rainbows)
Post by Shadowrunner on Feb 6, 2021 16:43:27 GMT -5
Chapter 7 Lunastar had brought Goldenstream’s body back to Stormclan’s camp for her clanmates to say goodbye. Lunastar was sad, she had let her clanmate die, and she almost wished she was still in her twoleg nest with her housefolk, curled up in their lap, away from the danger of forest life, but she shook that thought away quickly. She was here, she had to care for her clan. She couldn’t run away from that. Lunastar lay down next to Goldenstream’s already cold body and buried her nose in her clanmates fur. She would always remember how strongly Goldenstream had fought.
Lunastar gathered a patrol of the cats who didn’t want to attack windclan back, as some of them did. She had to discuss what had just happened with Proudstar, since he obviously didn’t know the whole story of what had happened. She walked off towards Windclan and waited for a patrol to come at the border. She doubted that the cats would lead her to windclan camp after the fight, but she might as well try. Luckily only one cat came, Lightheart! The windclan medicine cat must be gathering some herbs along the border. “Lightheart!” Lunastar called out to the she-cat, and she came over. “What is it Lunastar?” she said, dipping her head respectfully. “I need you to take me to windclan camp. Not to attack, I must talk to Proudstar about the battle this morning, he obviously doesn’t know the full story” Lunastar continued when Lightheart looked doubtful. Lightheart nodded her head and brought Lunastar and her small patrol followed Lightheart to windclans camp.
They arrived at Windclan camp for Lunastar only to feel the burning gazes of windclan on her pelt. The deputy, Tanglefur, came over with nothing but hostility in his eyes, he had been one of the cats to protest against Stormclans claim of the territory, “Lightheart why have you brought these cats here to our camp” he spat, but Lightheart remained calm. “Lunastar would like to speak to Proudstar about the battle earlier, she thinks he doesn’t know the full story and wants to tell him” Lightheart shouldered past Tanglefur with the stormclan cats behind her, and they soon reached the front of Proudstar’s den.”Proudstar, Lunastar is here to speak to you” Lightheart called. Lunastar raised her tail, signaling for her cats to wait outside, when Proudstar told her to come in. As the Stormclan leader came in and sat down, she began to tell him what had really happened. “You see, Stormclan did nothing wrong, we were patrolling our side of the border when we found some of your cats on our territory, they said that Stormclan wasn’t a real clan and that you had made a mistake giving us territory. Thrushpaw must have lied when he got back up because I know you would never send back up when it’s your cats that crossed the border” she finished, gazing calmly into the sandy toms amber eyes. He looked thoughtful for a moment, and then spoke “I believe what you say, after the battle a few cats reported the fight being on your side of the border, I thought that maybe my cats had just chased your patrol off our territory and into yours and continued the fight there but your story fits perfectly with it” he said, “What thrushpaw told me was that they had found your patrol on our territory hunting and stealing prey, but now I see that is not true. I will be sure to punish any further attempts from my cats to go on your territory and attack without my knowledge” he said, and flicked his tail dismissively. Lunastar left, and gathered her patrol to leave Windclan’s camp. They returned to camp with a Windclan warrior, Swiftleap, leading them back. Lunastar was glad that it hadn’t ended in battle, but was worried about how much his cats would listen, and how many times Lunastar would be able to go back to Windclan’s camp to report the trespassing to Proudstar.
Post by Shadowrunner on Feb 11, 2021 15:16:34 GMT -5
Chapter 8 Lunastar opened her eyes one… morning? She was not in her nest. She recognized this place, it was the same starry field she awoke in when she gained her nine lives, and when she had lost her first life. The brown tabby from those times appeared. “Greetings Lunastar, I’ve come to give you a message” he said. Lunastar tilted her head, and interrupted before he could speak again “First, what’s your name” she asked. The brown tabbies eyes glittered with humor, “I supposed I did forget to mention that, my name is Hawkfeather, I was of windclan before I joined starclan” he tilted his head “now can I deliver my message?”. Lunastar nodded, trying to hide her excitement, her first message from starclan! Hawkfeather spoke in a deep foreboding voice. “The moon will shine bright as an eagle falls, but it’s kits shall rise. The wind shall carry them away but they will find their way back, only to be drawn to it again. Trained by the darkness, they will soon blot out the moon.” He said. Lunastar wanted to ask more, but it was fading away too quickly. “Wait! No! Tell me more what does it mean!” Lunastar said, but she had now awoken in her den to the scream of her clanmates. She scrambled out of her den to ask what was wrong. “What happened?” she said, trying to hide her concern. Sparrowfur answered, with Eaglefall and her own kits by her side. “Eaglefall… is dead!” she cried. Lunastar froze “h-how what happened?!” she said, pushing into the nursery to find Crystalpool, the medicine cat at her side. Eaglefall had no visible wounds, her now blank eyes staring at nothing, as if waiting for something. “What happened Crystalpool?” she said. The medicine cat replied “I-I don’t know, Sparrowfur woke up to find her like this” she mewed, concerned. Lunastar suddenly recalled the prophecy Hawkfeather gave her. “An eagle will fall… and it’s kits shall rise but be carried away by the wind” she repeated to herself. Crystalpool looked at her quizzically “what was that?” she said, tilting her head. Lunastar suddenly turned around, she needed to find the kits. She burst out of the nursery to find Sparrowfur looking around frantically. “Sparrowfur what’s wrong!” she said, worried. “The kits! Eaglefalls kits are gone! And there was Windclan scent where I last saw them!” she yowled. sorry for the late update, I had some writers block with trying to figure out what the prophecy should be. After this I think I'll go from the kits point of view since the prophecy is about them :/
99% of people think all Pitbulls are mean, killer dogs. If you are the 1% that would stand up for them, copy this into your signature. (This is made by Radiant Rainbows)
mostly for me to remember the cats without having google open every second but ill post it if yall are curious XD
