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Post by Olive on Apr 10, 2016 9:54:35 GMT -5
Updates coming finishing up Chapter three, the name is odd pay attention to the names of chapters from now on if you piece them together you may figure out the story that lies underneath of the cats.
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Post by Lily~Myth on Apr 10, 2016 20:46:07 GMT -5
I can't wait to see it,
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Post by Olive on Apr 13, 2016 18:20:07 GMT -5
UPDATE YEAAAH so chapter three was done with a preset outline of the chapter so if this is better than the last two thats why XD(Why its longer than i meant for it to be)
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Post by Lily~Myth on Apr 13, 2016 19:26:55 GMT -5
This. Is. Awesome. A wild goldenclaw appears! Aspen uses stealth attack, stealth fails and flees.
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Post by Olive on Apr 13, 2016 20:20:38 GMT -5
^~^ Yay, glad you like it. Goldenclaw is actually fernclaw's mate. The two fight together and battle and if have a nickname "The Twin Claws" (Because it was odd that the two claws had been such good friends Fernclaw was only more merciful which is why she was deputy, because he wanted a cat who would be more merciful to enemies unlike Goldberg's XD) And for this chapter there is a lot of character development showing the relationships between all characters
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Post by Lily~Myth on Apr 13, 2016 20:25:07 GMT -5
That makes sense though it's also very funny.
I can't wait for Batpaw to show~! :3 also if you need more cats in the clans I can make more
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Post by Willowisp🍃 on Apr 22, 2016 0:34:34 GMT -5
I keep thinking Aspen is a girl and Jasper is a boy XD
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Post by Olive on Apr 22, 2016 9:15:11 GMT -5
I choose jasper's name specifically because it sounds like a boys name, Aaron if a different story of course but Jasper's supposed to have a name seeming to imply the character is male only to realize oh wait no their not.
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Post by Lily~Myth on Apr 22, 2016 21:17:12 GMT -5
I have a question, If (in the possible future of course) Aspen and Jasper becomes mates will one of their kits be named Casper?
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Post by Olive on Apr 22, 2016 21:57:50 GMT -5
-.-....reaaaallly? LIKE reaaaaalllly. YOU just asked that, XD... Its as bad as asking if one kit will be named Jaspen, or Asper...(Though Asper doesn't sound that bad of a name) The answer is no.
Here are the kit names they'd have Males: Topaz, Quartz, Birch. She-cats: Copper, Agate, Willow. (You might notice alot of them have mineral based names, its sorta a tradition thing.....and that all the names for male and female are switched. Topaz is the males name. I just like going with this sorta theme)
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Post by Lily~Myth on Apr 22, 2016 21:59:44 GMT -5
Okay, i thought it was funny though...XP
Those names are much better
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Post by Olive on Apr 22, 2016 22:09:15 GMT -5
(Mmmmhhhhmmm, > XD) I can't wait to update to chapter 4 just waiting for holly to edit it. Chapter 5 is gonna be......SUPER dramatic at the end i'm practically ready to SHOW YOU ALL NOW ;-;...but i can't and from Chapter 4, tell 8 is basically drama, on more drama and then suspense.... Chapter 8 will litterly make you cry(I hope,)....and i'll drag it out...MUAHAHAHAHHAHAH i'll take weeks before i update to chapter 9 which will reveal the truth and what happens...if anything WHY MUST I BE SO INTO MY OWN STORY... (I Showed my mom this she was actually super suprised at how well written this is, i might make some images and put a poll up) for a idea
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Post by Lily~Myth on Apr 22, 2016 22:22:06 GMT -5
Awesome!
*stares at screen* must.read. *grabs a box of tissues in case* what about chapters six and seven?
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Post by Olive on Apr 22, 2016 22:30:06 GMT -5
...well i can't say too much but you know...they have perspectives....thats all i can say or else i've said to much and the world explodes (also Art contest for a orignal character to get put into the story that won't happen until after at least chapter 10 BUT THEY'll BE IMPORTANT)
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Post by Lily~Myth on Apr 23, 2016 20:52:50 GMT -5
True, I'll wait patiently then.... *still stares at screen* Yeah an art contest! i wish I was great at drawing on the computer
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