Post by 🌼 Sprucetail 🌼 on Jul 5, 2017 22:57:55 GMT -5
My sister and I are making a warrior cats movie-type-thing. We need help making a prophecy. The leader is Graystar and his three children, Bramblepaw (male), Gingerpaw (Female, Medicine cat apprentice), Stormpaw (male). We need a prophecy that clues to the three being the key to saving the two clans, and reviving them. (One kit is going to leave to make their own clan) The two starting clans are LeafClan (Kira's home, main clan in movie) and DarkClan.
Post by ~~Honeyflower~~ on Jul 6, 2017 19:36:52 GMT -5
*Remembers the troll fic that I read called Starkit's prophecy*
THANK YOU TV TROPES FOR THE QUOTES
PS: TV tropes copied these straight from the Fanfic. Blame xDarkrosesx for the spelling and grammatical errors.
Comically missing the point:
"You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." StarPaw gasped. "What does it mean?"
(Lol it's a quote)
Here are a few others:
Curb-stomp battle:
Every single "fight" consists of one character running towards another character, and the other character dying.
The final chapter when StarGleam destroys all evil with Laser Beams
Death is cheap:
So far, every single character who has died has come back (with or without explanation). Until the last chapter.
Broken Rules:
Apparently, being "unfateful to our mat" is okay as long as it's StarGleam doing it.
Department of Redundancy Department:
'"Gasped" gasped everyone.'
And '"Today is important today."'
'Then they were in the Fark Forest. It was dark. Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and it wass heard to see.'
'Her reinbow eyes where glowed lick rani' (Translation: Her rainbow eyes glowed like a rainbow)
'it hert StarFleam! It hurt.'
'StarPaw wondered threw the forst madly. She was anger.y.'
"She turned in…. A BARE!" One sentence later: "It was a bare!"
"'Hi she said.' 'Hi.' He said. 'Hi.' She rippled."
"GASP" GASPED THE ENTER CALN."
'StarGlema the puprle cat / Was a vrey purpel cat'
At least one chapter has several lines of dialogue written twice in a row, word for word.
Everything is better with sparkles:
GleamStar's "checks" are very sparkly.
"'I HAVE KITS SILVERSDREAM! IKTS!11!1' SPARKLED STARGLEAM."
Dull surprise:
After informing StarGleam of BlackStar's "swisscide" and observing her shocked reaction, all Firestar can say in response is...
'FierStart: i know rite.'
One-man army:
In 'Chapeter thee the Batle With ShadwoCaln!', StarPaw and JazzPaw see Blackstar!1!111
"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.
The Unfavorite: StarGleam's third kit, FireKit, has been mentioned a grand total of twice.
Lol. Ok, ok, I'll start thinking of prophecies now.
Post by 🌼 Sprucetail 🌼 on Jul 9, 2017 8:34:33 GMT -5
Okay so, Bramblepaw is the one leaving. He is leaving because he loves a cat in Darkclan and their love is forbidden, They leave to make their own clan. The other two are in Leafclan.
I really Like Hollywing's. But lets see what else comes!
🌌"Isn't that nice? We're just all little clumps for Stardust, walking around."🌌
Why are you naming the Clan RippleClan? It should be BrambleClan because Clans are usually named after the founder, in this case that'd be Bramblepaw/warriorname/star.
And how will you be filming this movie? Will you animate it or use toys/stuffed animals to act out things?
But anyways, here's the prophecy.
The Harsh Storm and Ginger Sun will combine to revive the Leaf and The Darkness, While the Bramble's Sting creates a new world.
"The dark clouds and the color of the sun will restore the shadows and bushes to their full greatness as the tendril will rise with the waves.
I just didn't want it too specific or direct; it can trick others into thinking it was some other cats instead. You can change the color part if you consider the sun a different color. XD
Oh, look! This one is much worse than my original one. I like the first one much more than this.
Also, Bramblepaw just HAS to get into a forbidden romance. Isn't that too cliche and overused in the series? But since they do run off and make their own Clan, it is still cliche since Leafpool and Crowfeather tried to run off... Sorry about the criticism, but I can't help but HATE forbidden loves since it happened a million times and breaks the code. Ugh....
I didn't want to make it too specific since I don't tend to like obvious prophecies. If it were leaves, it takes out the misunderstanding and becomes more obvious and noticeable.
Also, the first one was the most vague.... so I'd go with that anyway...
"An apprentice of the stars will stay with her kin while another leaves to join a cat from the shadows. Together, the three of them will revitalize the Clans before all is lost."
Gingerpaw and Stormpaw will stay in their Clan while Bramblepaw runs away with his forbidden love, who is from DarkClan. I used "apprentice of the stars" because Gingerpaw is a medicine cat apprentice, so she's close to StarClan.
Post by Rival Hummingbird on Jul 12, 2017 4:13:29 GMT -5
'Ello! Prophecies aren't really my strong suit, either, but I've found it's a little easier to focus on specific events or roles the characters will play if you're trying not to make it too obvious which characters are involved.
Light will scatter the dark And smother their spark With the end of everything just. Time will wither the leaves, And all they'd once believed, Bringing all that you've conquered to dust.
You will need three, If you wish to be free, Of tragedy's escalation. Though the bonds of their kin, May strength stem from within, And love, to new creation.
I went a little vague/metaphorical in the first verse, because I'm not quite sure how the clans will be in danger. I was thinking "stem" in the second-to-last line could hint that the cats from the prophecy are in LeafClan. "Bonds of their kin" implies they're related. Needing "Three" could mean three cats, but in hindsight it could also mean three clans. Ahaha, I'm not sure if that's any good, but hopefully it gave you some ideas!
In a colorless world, three will rise, and a third will be born from the first/second/third. "In a colorless world" is hinting at Graystar and all hope seeming to be lost for the Clans. "Three will rise" is the kits. "A ripple will be made by the first/second/third" refers to a new Clan being made by the firstborn/secondborn/thirdborn, depending on which one you want Bramblepaw. I have experience making prophecies. I write my own fan stories.
Here are some of my prophecies: Do not trust the winter, for it will betray. (In my fan story, the FANCLANS know what winter is. Short story: Evil SnowClan leader Winterstar is evil. LONG STORY: MoonClan medicine cat recieves the prophecy. When she hears of the birth of Winterkit, the evil bell goes off inside of her head. Frostkit, future MoonClan leader, is born and soon falls in love with Winterkit/paw. Timeskipping, Winterstar kills Froststar.) The birch must not rule, or bad things will come of it. (Maplestar (main character)'s presumed death causes the leader of MoonClan and main main character, Willowstar, to fall into depression. The new leader of TreeClan (Maplestar's Clan), Birchstar, is evil, but only Shadowsky (Main Main Character 2) knows that. The one who recieves the prophecy on his first trip to the Moonstone is TreeClan Medicine Cat Sablefoot, and Sablefoot delivers the message to Shadowsky.) There are more I could list, but I don't feel like it.
Last Edit: Nov 15, 2018 18:36:31 GMT -5 by maxils: my prophecies
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