Thornclan | A corrupted clan roleplay

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Intro: Thornclan! One of the best clans ever created. Right? Dreams of other cats outside the clans wishing they could join, and often sending their own children into the clan. But what actually happens inside this clan? How did it get this reputation? What did this leader do? What did this starclan do? Questions, questions, questions, shall they be answered? We shall see.

Rules:
-Falconstar's general rules. [Of course.]
-No explaining blood, death, sickness, etc in detail.
-Do not kill another character without the owner's permission.
-Do not do one liners.
-If you've read this: Eggroll 
-Do not double post. 
-Don't fight over some random thing.
-Do not have a major character unless you can roleplay often.
-Try to roleplay 2-4 weeks. Your character can be killed after. 
-Please tell me if you need a break. I will gladly help take care of your character while you take a break.
-No gary/mary sues.
-It would be appreciated if you could give a picture of your cat. 

Clan Rules:
-Do not question the leader and their decisions.
-Do not expect cats to change | If cats kill, they are to be killed. 
-Medicine cats are allowed to have mates, though not kits.
-Cats who are seen as to strong for their own good are killed.
-Cats who are from the outside must be tested in the ways of the before. [ They are to go out and get a massive amount of prey. Most kill others for this.]
-After a cat dies, cats are to sit with the cat and do not move for a day and night. 
-Starclan is one of the most respected things here, if not the most. They are not to be questioned.
-Kits and former rouges should have a follower to protect and monitor them. 
-Any cat executed shall be done on a full moon. If not, keep them prisoner till.
-Queens, Elders, and kits will come first.
-Those kept prisoner should be monitored by a cat. Mainly deputy or moons.
-Kits are able to become apprentices when they are able to jump off the Tall Tree. 
-Apprentices are to respect the warriors, and if they do not, they are forced to spend one night in the grass patches.


Territory:

Inside camp:
-Silent Vine - This is the leaders den. It is in a high tree, with many leaves. The leader's nest is in the middle, with the branches parched out so moonlight can shine on the sleeping leader. No cat other than the leader should be allowed into this area. If needed to talk in the den, they will reach a lower branch. Vines and moss cover this tree.
- Deputy's Den - The deputy does not sleep with the warriors. They sleep in the middle of the camp, with no bedding. This is because the leader should always be able to see their deputy, as well as starclan, the cats in the clan, and everyone, to know who they should respect next. They are allowed to sleep with another cat if they are their mate, but the other cat must be outside with them.
- Warrior's Den - The warrior's den is a large group of trees that covers a patch of grass. Many beddings are in the branches, but these are only the cats who deserve this place. These warriors are the ones who have never broken rules, with muscular bodies, and who are clan-born. The cats in the grass patch in the middle are the cats who are new warriors, with weak, frail warriors. Sometimes elders are placed there, however it is not often.
- Apprentice's Den - The apprentices den is a large grass patch. It has a few trees in the back, but they are angled to see the moon as it rises. They are not to speak while in their den, as if they do they earn a night in the grass patch. They have thorns around their nests to show where to go. This means most apprentices have scars and thorns in their sides. [And rarely their head.] Most cats kept prisoner are held here.
- Tall Tree - This is the nursery. The queens have their nests on the floor of it while they are waiting for their kits to be born, but as soon as they are, they are placed at the top of the tallest branch that is stable. They have thorns placed near the ends of certain branches to show they are weak. A lot of kits have died from this tree.
- Amber Moon - This is the cat's den who have been seen as potential. Kits, apprentice, warriors. These cats are trained more than they should. The den reeks of blood, and has many dirt-filled nests. The den by itself is in a small patch of trees, two trees to be exact. The warriors go on the left, the bigger one. While the kits and apprentices go onto the right, the smaller one. [For the tall tree part, they do it here. Queens are to keep their baby with them till they are able to be fed prey. 
- Medicine Cat Den - This is the biggest den. It has 4 trees around it, with a massive grass patch in the center. It has herbs lined up on the sides, with honey bees having hives on one of the branches of the trees. It has around 7-8 beddings, with their beddings a tad bit ripped.
-Star Clan burial - This is where they burial the dead. Prey, herbs, and water are placed here every day. 

Outside of Camp
- Clear Trees - This is the main area of their territory. It holds most prey, enemies, and dangers. It has large trees, mostly oak, with thorns, flowers, and vines. It has patches of grass, but mostly covered by trees.
-Opened Water - This is where the cats get water and wash any dirt off. Has no trees near it, but has thorns near the other side. [They do not travel past the side they are on. They have no reason to.]
-Grass Patches: The most deadly area. It has prison ivy, with bears, foxes, and many animals living there. Not many have been out it alive.
-Blood Pond -  A musty pond with frogs, algae, and alligators. Around in has more run down trees.
-Shattered Stones - A group of stones with jagged points. Often causes paw injuries, but prey do roam here.

Prey:
-Squirrels -Common in Clear Trees
-Birds - [Jay - Common in OW, Thrush - Rare in CT, Woodpecker, Common to find but has to be skilled to catch.]
-Fish [Trout, Common in OW, Red Snapper, Rare in OW]
-Frogs [Common is BP]
-Lizards [Common in BP]
-Adders [Very common in SS, Uncommon in BP]

Preditors:
-Foxes [Common in GP]
-Bears [Uncommon, common in winter.]
-Coyotes: [Common in BP]
-Twolegs [Rare]
-Badgers [Rare]
-Rats [Uncommon, if you did not know, they carry diseases.]

-Note: Moons are the ranks who are in the Amber Moon place.

Form
Name of user [Not showcase]:
Name of Cat:
Rank:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Family:
Crush [Or mate]:
Kits [Optional]:
History:
Password:
Other:

Seasons:
-New-Leaf []
-Green-Leaf [x]
-Leaf-Fall []
-Leaf Bare []

-Note: We will start next week, on Wednesday. [11/5/2020]

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Leader
Swiftstar - A large, black tom with a white mask covering his eyes. He has a scar over his right eye, making it blind. His eyes, though, are a light blue, matching the soft picture of what certain cats think of him. He has small paws, and is small in general, but this is not taken lightly. Most don't dare call him short, as he has been known to either attack them, or send them to the grass patch. He is a rude, snappy Tom, though he is very manipulative. He plays tricks on people, making them think of an image of him, though he has never been like that. He is a heavy star clan cat, but takes their wording wrong. He twists it, causing most cats to think he is not speaking to star clan at all. Though, this mindset was pushed into his. Before he was leader, his father, Shatteredtail, treated him wrong in the ways of snapping his mindset. He went almost insane from him. Though, at points he does just because he can. Why not, I mean?  He barely pays attention to his deputy, not realizing she is scared. Will he, though? [@strawberry ] 

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I gave up giving him a picture after the 4th try

Deputy
Pumpkinspots - A 40 moon black and orange calico. She worries a lot, sadly. Though, she is a quick thinker. She is quiet, but when she isn't, she is quick to get angry. She had a brother, though he ran away from the clan. Her parents are dead. However, when her father was alive, he saved Pumpkinspots, then drowned. Her mother died giving birth to her and her brother. She is scared, wishing to leave, but hasn't. [Pumpkin Spots ]

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Medicine Cat
Lilyshine- Lilyshine is an average sized she-cat. She is also pretty fat. She has white fur which feels very soft. Her pelt pattern is plain, expect for her two black front paws. She has blue and green eyes, and her fur is short. She has very short claws, and they are clear. She does have some difficulty seeing out of her left eye since Shortpaw hit her accidentally. It won’t last for long though. Lilyshine may appear as a sweet, gentle she-cat, but that’s far from the truth. She is pretty selfish, but tries not to show it. One thing is that she is in love with Frogleap, and is constantly trying to get him to love her. She will snap at some cat pretty easily, and doesn’t really take her job seriously. She is very lazy, and expects cats to give her anything she wants just because she is a medicine cat. Lilyshine also doesn’t really like kits or apprentices. She sees them as annoying and greedy little birdbrains. She constantly whines and complains about anything just for the sake of complaining. At least she’s good at her job. Wave and Ice are her mother and father. She was abandoned Thornclan. Lilyshine was abandoned in Thronclan as a kit. She has no idea who her parents are. She became a medicine cat after failing her assessments over and over again. She does her job, and is actually pretty good at healing other cats. [I don’t know what I’m doing ]

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Medicine Cat Apprentice
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Moons
Stormpelt - Stormpelt is way bigger than an average cat. He has a good build. He has blue tinted fur, which is ruff and most of the time has blood stains on it. He has a completely white underbelly, and a little white fleck right next to his right eye. He has green eyes, and his fur is medium sized. He has very long claws, and they are pure black. There are multiple scars along his back. Stormpelt is a very strict and cruel cat. He is very viscous, but still loyal to the clan. He won’t attack any cat inside of Thronclan, but is still a massive jerk. He bullies very cat expect Swiftstar, and doesn’t really care for other cats safety too. Since he is seen as having much potential, he was put into the Amber Moon den. He usally gets into fights with rogues and kittypets on purpose. He had a mate named Specklesong, and his kits are Cherrykit, who is now dead, and Shortpaw.  Stormpelt has unknown origins. He is clanborn though. He is always seen as having much potential. He hates his son Shortpaw, since he always reminds him of Specklesong, his deceased mate. Specklesong died giving birth to Shortpaw, along with 1 other stillborn kit named Cherrykit. Stormpelt thinks that Shortpaw is the reason that they died, and so hates him. [I don’t know what I’m doing ]

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Warriors
Frogleap - A tall, black and brown like tom. He has strong for-arms, though his back legs are able to let him leap far. He has soft green eyes, with a torn ear. He has a scar over his side, that comes open once or twice a year. His body is sharp, with his bones sticking out at points. His fur is short, though his tail fur his long and it drags at points. He is a calm and sweet cat, but around the leader, deputy, and medicine cat, he gets tough, and rude. He puts on this act so he can still look good and not get into trouble with them. He is a former rouge, with his mother bringing him in as a young kit. He was raced by a queen who never wanted kits, but treated him well anyway. He was one of the first to get off the Tall Tree without breaking a leg. He is the mate to Honeydrip! [@strawberry ]

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 Mothsight - Mothsight is an average sized cat. She is skinny. She has a black pelt, and it feels ruff. She has no markings on her pelt whatsoever, expect for a long scar on her left flank. She has yellow eyes, and her fur is long. She has extra sharp claws, and they are clear. Mothsight is a very kind she-cat. Despite her surroundings, she tries to remain sweet and kind to every cat. She aims to be the best warrior ever, and maybe even deputy or leader. Of course, it is hard to stay positive when everyone is so negative around you. She hasn’t snapped... yet. She does endure a ton of stress throughout her daily life, so sometimes she does go out alone to yell or scratch something up. She definitely isn’t perfect though. Most see her as a crybaby because she does cry a lot. She is very weak, and will back down if she feels scared. Her mother and father are sadly dead. Despite being clanborn, lost of cats see Mothsight as untrustworthy. She is the kindest to rogues and anything outside of the clan. She was caught as an apprentice trying to give prey to a loner. So, many cats think that she would easily abandon the clan.

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Apprentices
Shortpaw -  Shortpaw is obviously a very small cat. He is very skinny. He has a light grey pelt, and it feels ruff. He has tabby marks on his back, and they are all black. He has amber eyes, and his fur is short. He has average size claws, and they are a tarnish color. Shortpaw might come off as a rude and stubborn apprentice, but is actually a total sweetheart. He cares about every cat deeply, even his father. He tries to impress him, but it never works. Most of the time he’s just scared, causing him to accidentally snap. He doesn’t really have any friends, but I might allow him to have maybe 1 or 2 depending on the cat and if the owner says it’s okay. He is very lonely, and most of the time is seen at the Opened Water. He likes chasing butterflies and other bugs there. He also isn’t the best hunter around. He tries to catch fish, but most of the time fails. His father is Stormpelt, and his deceased family is his mother, Specklesong, and his sister, Cherrykit. Shortpaw is always being neglected by his father, causing him to have some emotional issues. He doesn’t remember his mother or sister at all, but believes that they are watching him from Starclan. [I don’t know what I’m doing ]

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Queens
Honeydrip - A small she-cat with honey-creme colored fur. She has soft blue eyes with long fur. Her front left claw is clawed in half, but she doesn't fight, so she doesn't mind it. She is a full time queen, as she had her first litter as a rouge and prefers to stay like a mother. She is a sweet, plump she-cat, who is mates with Frogleap. She loves him dearly, as he found her with her kits. Honeydrip didn't have a welcoming start, almost dying from the green patches. Though, another cat helped her while she had to hunt. Still, she doesn't know who it was, but she thinks it was a friend of hers before. She knows the medicine cat, Lilyshine, likes her mate. So, she has made it more difficult for him to see her. [@strawberry ] -Note, Kits for her are open! Just make sure you @ me for it.

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Kits
Elders
Relationships/Families:

<> = Mates,  x = hates [<x left hates right, >x - Right hates left], < - Right likes left, > - Left likes right, ><- Both like each other, * - Parents to, ^ = siblings, ---- = dead, / = Npc

Honeydrip <> Frogleap
Shatteredtail <> Heavyrain * Swiftstar ^ Amberkit ^ Rabbitkit
/ Wave <> / Ice * Lilyshine
Frogleap > Lilyshine
Lilyshine >x Honeydrip
Stormpelt <> Specklesong * Shortpaw ^ Cherrykit

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

(This role play sounds really great! I love this idea! It’s been a long time since an r/p has opened, so thank you! I don’t mean to control your story or anything, but maybe limit to one cat guarding former rogues, kits, and prisoners? It might be a little bit to much, but that’s just my opinion. Anyway, I’m going to use some characters from The Stars Alliance just to get a better grasp on them! I will wait before Lilyshine to get accepted before making other cats.)

Name of user: diamondstar84
Name of cat: Lilyshine
Rank: Medicine cat
Age: 38 moons old
Appearance: Lilyshine is an average sized she-cat. She is also pretty fat. She has white fur which feels very soft. Her pelt pattern is plain, expect for her two black front paws. She has blue and green eyes, and her fur is short. She has very short claws, and they are clear. She does have some difficulty seeing out of her left eye since Shortpaw(One of my other characters that I will make) hit her accidentally. It won’t last for long though.

Personality: Lilyshine may appear as a sweet, gentle she-cat, but that’s far from the truth. She is pretty selfish, but tries not to show it. One thing is that she is in love with Frogleap, and is constantly trying to get him to love her. She will snap at some cat pretty easily, and doesn’t really take her job seriously. She is very lazy, and expects cats to give her anything she wants just because she is a medicine cat. Lilyshine also doesn’t really like kits or apprentices. She sees them as annoying and greedy little birdbrains. She constantly whines and complains about anything just for the sake of complaining. At least she’s good at her job...
Family: Wave(Mother) and Ice(Father). She isn’t aware of who her parents are since she was abandoned Thornclan. They aren’t dead though.
Crush: Frogleap
History: Lilyshine was abandoned in Thronclan as a kit. Like before, she has no idea who her parents are. She became a medicine cat after failing her assessments over and over again. She does her job, and is actually pretty good at healing other cats.
Password: Lol no
Other: She is Heterosexual.

Name of user: diamondstar84
Name of cat: Shortpaw
Rank: Apprentice 
‘Age: 8 moons old
Appearance: Shortpaw is obviously a very small cat. He is very skinny. He has a light grey pelt, and it feels ruff. He has tabby marks on his back, and they are all black. He has amber eyes, and his fur is short. He has average size claws, and they are a tanish  color. 

Personality: Shortpaw might come off as a rude and stubborn apprentice, but is actually a total sweetheart. He cares about every cat deeply, even his father. He tries to impress him, but it never works. Most of the time he’s just scared, causing him to accidentally snap. He doesn’t really have any friends, but I might allow him to have maybe 1 or 2 depending on the cat and if the owner says it’s okay. He is very lonely, and most of the time is seen at the Opened Water. He likes chasing butterflies and other bugs there. He also isn’t the best hunter around. He tries to catch fish, but most of the time fails.
Family: Stormpelt and Specklesong(Deceased), Cherrykit is his deceased sister.
History: Shortpaw is always being neglected by his father, causing him to have some emotional issues. He doesn’t remember his mother or sister at all, but believes that they are watching him from Starclan.
Password: No
Other: He is Homosexual  

Name of user: diamondstar84
Name of cat: Mothsight
Rank: Warrior
Age: 18 moons old
Appearance: Mothsiight is an average sized cat. She is skinny. She has a black pelt, and it feels ruff. She has no markings on her pelt whatsoever, expect for a long scar on her left flank. She has yellow eyes, and her fur is long. She has extra sharp claws, and they are clear. 

Personality: Mothsight is a very kind she-cat. Despite her surroundings, she tries to remain sweet and kind to every cat. She aims to be the best warrior ever, and maybe even deputy or leader. Of course, it is hard to stay positive when everyone is so negative around you. She hasn’t snapped... yet. She does endure a ton of stress throughout her daily life, so sometimes she does go out alone to yell or scratch something up. She definitely isn’t perfect though. Most see her as a crybaby because she does cry a lot. She is very weak, and will back down if she feels scared.
Family: Ferneye(Mother) and Barleyfoot(Father). Both are dead.
History: Despite being clanborn, lost of cats see Mothsight as untrustworthy. She is the kindest to rogues and anything outside of the clan. She was caught as an apprentice trying to give prey to a loner. So, many cats think that she would easily abandon the clan. 
Password: Eggroll
Other: She is Heterosexual.

(Welp, thats all the characters @strawberry!)

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[Accepted! Also, you're right, probably should limit it. Thanks for telling me! Also, please remove the password. Thanks!]
[I don’t know what I’m doing]

[Pumpkin Spots]

I can roleplay everyday

Name of user [Not showcase]:sarah
Name of Cat: Pumpkin ' Spots
Rank: Deputy if you want
Age: 40 moons
Appearance: Black cat with orange spots [My profile picture]
Personality: Worries way too much, Quick thinker, Anger issues but tries to be quiet most of the time
Family: Her brother ran away from the clan and her parents are dead.
Crush [Or mate]: None
Kits [Optional]: None
History: Nearly drowned in a river but her Dad saved her then he drowned. Mom died giving birth to her and her brother
Password: Yer ma C:
Other: Doesn't like the clan but stays because she's scared C:

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

Name of user: diamondstar84
Name of cat: Stormpelt
Rank: Moons
Age: 47 moons old
Appearance: Stormpelt is way bigger than an average cat. He has a good build. He has blue tinted fur, which is ruff and most of the time has blood stains on it. He has a completely white underbelly, and a little white fleck right next to his right eye. He has green eyes, and his fur is medium sized. He has very long claws, and they are pure black. There are multiple scars along his back.

Personality: Stormpelt is a very strict and cruel cat. He is very viscous, but still loyal to the clan. He won’t attack any cat inside of Thronclan, but is still a massive jerk. He bullies very cat expect Swiftstar, and doesn’t really care for other cats safety too. Since he is seen as having much potential, he was put into the Amber Moon den. He usally gets into fights with rogues and kittypets on purpose.
Family: Specklesong was his mate, Cherrykit is his deceased daughter, and Shortpaw is his son.
Mate: Specklesong was his mate
Kits: Cherrykit and Shortpaw are his kits
History: Stormpelt has unknown origins. He is clanborn though. He is always seen as having much potential. He hates his son Shortpaw(once again a character who will be added later), since he always reminds him of Specklesong, his deceased mate. Specklesong died giving birth to Shortpaw, along with 1 other stillborn kit named Cherrykit. Stormpelt thinks that Shortpaw is the reason that they died, and so hates him.
Password: 
Other: He is Heterosexual

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[Pumpkin Spots, I don’t know what I’m doing, Accepted! Please edit out the password.]
[-note, IDK, if you are doing multiple cats, please do it on your main message. Thanks :)]

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

Okay! I usually do it on multiple posts since if I accidentally exit out of a page it will still save my progress. If I edit it doesn’t save it, but I will write it on the main one.

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

Hey @strawberry? Could you please add Mothsight? Sorry if I’m bugging you-

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Oh!I'm sorry, of course! I didn't have time yesterday, so sorry.

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

It’s okay!

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I'm so sorry! Yesterday I found out your thing was glitched, so I'll have to type it all out, but while I do, the roleplay has officially started!

[I don’t know what I’m doing, Pumpkin Spots]

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

It’s fine! Do you want us to start it?

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I can:

Swiftstar [Leader, in Silent Vine]
Swiftstar glared, his gaze cold. He stretched his legs, before jumping down. It was early in the morning, and he liked waking up at this time, as the sun was barely rising. He walked to the Amber Moon, ["Wake up."] He snapped. His tail flicked, his ears down. He liked to seem intimidating, so he always showed himself as this.

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

Stormpelt:

Stormpelt quickly jolted up at the sound of his leader’s voice. He must not make the impression of being lazy! He sat up straight, and dipped his head in respect for his leader. “I apologize for not waking up earlier. I wen’t hunting last night for a bit, and came back late. I must’ve lost track of time. I again, apologize.” Stormpelt quietly padded out of the den, trying to seem like he was active, despite the feeling of tiredness hanging over him. ‘Stormpelt you mousebrain! You made yourself look bad in front of the leader. I have to be more careful. Maybe I shouldn’t stay up hunting so late...’