Post by Twilightstar on Jul 4, 2015 13:10:06 GMT -5
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(Thats what I thought but on Roseclan both Spiderpaw and Midnight were the EXACT same. I was so confused xD)
Lionclaw soon was directly next to the rabbit, and he lunged, snapping the rabbits neck between his jaws, and dropping it once it was dead. His eyes shifted back to yellow as he turned back to the two apprentices, smiling sheepishly. "Sorry guys."
Summerpaw huffed angrily, "Meanie. You didnt even let us try," she complained
(Lol, dude, I thought they just turned RED OMG I CANT EVEN REMEMBER MY OWn CHARACTERs NO ;-
Runepaw was up, staring at Fangstar coolly with his eye(s). "IS there a problem?"
(Can leaders even change mentors?? XD)
Midnight stopped outside Dawnclans camp, scenting the air before frowning and scoping out the perimeter
Spiderpaw continued to follow him, wondering what his brother was doing.
Post by leafblossom on Jul 4, 2015 13:51:05 GMT -5
(So does that mean Nightmare looks exactly like Midnight? XD )
Badgerpaw would have complained along with Summerpaw, but he was looking at Lionclaw's eyes. Weren't they red just a second ago? he wondered.
Fangstar shook his head. "No, I was just thinking..." he trailed off, unable to bring up the subject of Runepaw's damaged eye. He decided to let the apprentice recover and get used to his one eye before mentioning it.
(I'm pretty sure they can. It's kind of like what happened with Cinderpelt except he'll still be a warrior. I was thinking he could just have training sessions with Claw and not have to switch.)
Shade twitched in his sleep, sensing a familiar presence. He slowly blinked open his yellow eyes and sat up, surveying the medicine cat den. His friends were still asleep beside him. Shade lifted his muzzle and scented the air. He thought he could detect a familiar scent. Shade frowned, knowing who it was. He quietly stood up, trying not to wake the others, and padded out of the den.
~~~ (Since this one was a big block of text, I decided to separate it and use the actual dialogue rules. New speaker, new paragraph. )
Briarpaw could see DawnClan's entrance now. Excited, the raced up to the Clan. She was stopped in her tracks by a large, brown tabby tom guarding the entrance. A light gray tom stood at his side, a tooth poking from his mouth. "Um, I'm here to see my brother, Shade. I heard he moved here..." Briarpaw explained nervously. The brown tabby smiled.
"Oh, yes, we know Shade. He's an ally to the Clan." Briarpaw's face brightened.
"You do? Is he here?" she asked. The tabby nodded.
"Yes, he was injured in a recent badger attack and is staying in the Clan to recover." Briarpaw gasped.
"Is he alright?" The tabby tom nodded.
"Yes, he's fine. Come and see for yourself," he motioned for her to enter the Clan.
"Thank you. I'm Briarpaw, from RoseClan. My brothers Spiderpaw and Midnight may also be vising later," Briarpaw introduced herself and her siblings.
"I'm Woodlcaw," the tabby tom introduced himself, "and this is Grayfang, the deputy." Grayfang, the gray tom with the poking tooth, smiled and nodded politely.
"Nice to meet you," he greeted. Oh wow, the deputy! Briarpaw thought excitedly. It was strange for a deputy to be one guard duty, though.
Post by leafblossom on Jul 8, 2015 20:50:45 GMT -5
Badgerpaw jumped, his train of thought broken, then shook his head. "Nothing," he replied. I'll tell Summerpaw about it later.
"Take all the time you need to rest, though knowing you, I'm sure you'll be up again soon," Fangstar reassured his apprentice, smiling at the last bit. "I heard that you fought well," he praised, "now rest up, and come to me if you need anything."
(Yup.)
Briarpaw thought she could sense her brother, and looked behind her to see Spiderpaw joining her. "That's Spiderpaw," she flicked her tail toward her brother. I better tell him about the news, that Shade's been injured.
Shade grimaced. None of his clanmates would probably detect the scent, but he couldn't get it to leave his nose. He could detect the faint scent of his brother, Midnight, and it stung his nose. Why is he lurking around? I have more important things to deal with. Shade thought bitterly. He recalled hating his brother when he was younger, though now he didn't care much about him nor cared about proving himself to him anymore. Of all times to appear, he picked now to show up.
Post by Twilightstar on Jul 9, 2015 5:39:47 GMT -5
Im a Vampire Zombie Flawless Unicorn At Your Service
SUmmerpaw gave Badgerpaw an odd look before turning to Lionclaw. "Can we go back now," She complained loudly, "You ruined the hunting mood."
Lionclaw chuckled, "Yea, we can head back." He gently picked up the (Squirrel? Mouse? Big foot?) before turning and heading back towards camp
Runepaw nodded at his mentor, "Okay." Yea, No, he thought to himself, Not going to you for anything, even if I dont think I can see out of one of my eyes...
Spiderpaw grinned, "Hello, don't mind my name. Our parents were a bit of mouse-brains."
Midnight paused, and looked around, his eyes taking in everything all at once
Screen name: Captain Wolfpelt (@ wolfpelt) Cat's name: Nightclaw Cat's gender: Male Cat's description and eye color: Nightclaw has a pitch black fur, with a small white dot on his chest. He's very muscular and strong. He has serveral scars in his ear and over his body. He has dark blue eyes. Cat's Personality: Nightclaw isn't very social, and prefers to be alone. He loves to fight and doesn't let anyone insult him or command him around. He's confident about himself but doesn't brag about his skills. He's good at sneaking, but not very pacient, so he's an average hunter. Night only swims when it's really hot outside, and doesn't like climbing either. Like his name says, he loves the night, and hates getting up early. He's not very optimistic but doesn't cry about his life all the time either. He's the one that says "shut up and deal with it." Rank: Warrior History(Optional): Normal Clan History, except for that his brother betrayed him once. His brother stole his mate, and tried to kill him several times. He got trust issues after that, so it's kind of hard to befriend him. Mate(Optional): None Crush(Optional): None Other: If I need to change anything, just tell me xD
Post by leafblossom on Jul 9, 2015 17:32:23 GMT -5
(Accepted. )
Badgerpaw followed behind Lionclaw who was carrying a Big Foot in his jaws, falling in next to Summerpaw. He glanced at her, wanting to tell her he saw Lionclaw's eyes change color, but decided to wait until they returned to camp.
Fangstar sighed and headed into his den. He probably won't come to me for anything.
Woodclaw smiled and flicked his tail. "Nothing wrong with the name, I think it's unique," he replied. Grayfang gave a nod beside him.
They seem friendly. Briarpaw thought, glancing from Woodclaw to Grayfang. She turned to Spiderpaw, remembering to tell him the bad news. "Spiderpaw, Shade is here, but he was injured in a badger attack," Briarpaw explained.
Shade turned his attention toward the Clan entrance. He'd smelled his other siblings, Briarpaw and Spiderpaw, though had been too distracted by Midnight's scent to go and greet them. Shade padded over to the entrance, suddenly excited to see them. It had been moons since he'd seen his siblings. If only Thornpaw was here too. It's been so long.
Last Edit: Jul 9, 2015 17:34:34 GMT -5 by leafblossom
Post by Twilightstar on Jul 9, 2015 20:03:44 GMT -5
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(Well, Lets see... I dont know. A queen, Whitemoon, had kits (With two different guys, what do ya think xD), and uhm, well, Badgerpaw and Summerpaw are to be mates because its already been predetermined AND LEAF DONT DISSAPOINT ME ON THIS BECAUSE I WILL CRY I SWEAR, And lets see... Shade's siblings came to town, Spiderpaw, Briarpaw and Midnight (Drama?), Runepaw and Blazepaw had a BATTLE WITH ROGUES And Runepaw almost died but cant really see out of one of his eyes (I dont know if its the left or the right or the middle)... Ahm... Lionclaw is a bipolar cat, fyi, just in case you ever run into him. ANd, Yea, I think thats it> I dont know sorry omg))
Summerpaw nudged Badgerpaw with her shoulder, "Hey, are you sure youre alright?" She lowered her voice slightly, giving Lionclaw a look to make sure he couldnt hear
Lionclaw continued padding forward, not noticing the two apprentices lagging behind as he carried BIG FOOT OMG[/i] a rabbit in his jaws
Spiderpaw nodded, "I know, I could scent him earlier when we crossed the border. And a badger attack? Ouch."
Runepaw stumbled out of the Medicine Cat Den, nearly falling flat on his face as he tried to focus with only one eye. This is going to be hard... Where's Blaze?
(And jump in anywhere that makes sense for your character to join it. Leaf could probably help better BUT IM TRYING AND IM SORRY ;-
Post by leafblossom on Jul 10, 2015 21:10:46 GMT -5
(Yeah, that basically sums it up. XD And don't worry Twi, I won't disappoint you this time! Badgerpaw and Summerpaw are future mates!)
"Um, Summerpaw, have you noticed Lionclaw is carrying a Big Foot?" Badgerpaw had been planning to tell her once they got back to camp, but decided to tell her now. He glanced to Lionclaw to make sure he wasn't listening. "I saw his eyes turn red," Badgerpaw whispered.
Blazepaw padded out of the elders den, having finishing delivering their meal, and spotted Runepaw out of the medicine cat den. He smiled as his brother nearly fell on his face, though was glad to see him awake and moving. Blazepaw hurried over to him. "How're you doing?" he asked.
Shade padded through the entrance to see his brother and sister, Briarpaw and Spiderpaw, standing outside. He wondered how he must have looked, his injured shoulder covered in herbs and cobwebs, but he smiled nonetheless, glad to see them. "It's nice to see you two! How have you been?" Shade asked. There was so much to catch up on, he had to introduce them to his new friends, and Blossom when she was feeling better. Seeing his siblings made him feel a bit better, after feeling so guilty about Blossom's accident. He wondered if they noticed his change in demeanor; he was an angry little fur-ball the last time they'd seen him.
"Good! How's your shoulder?" Briarpaw asked, happy to see her brother again. She noticed that he seemed a lot friendlier than before, less like the grumpy brother she remembered.
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Post by Twilightstar on Jul 13, 2015 23:04:04 GMT -5
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Summerpaw frowned at Badgerpaw, "Its not really possible for a cats eyes to turn red... You know that, right?"
Runepaw huffed at his brother, "Absolutely great, Blaze, Totally, fantastically awesome. The sun is shining, And I CANT SEE OUT OF ONE OF MY EYES" he hissed with anger, "So, My day is perfectly fine and im perfectly fine. Obviously."
Spiderpaw grinned at Shade, "Hey, nice to see you. What have you been up to here?" He had noticed Shade's new attitude as well, but paid no mind to it because everyone changes after a while.
Lionclaw entered camp first, not noticing Summerpaw and Badgerpaw entering camp. Padding over to the fresh kill pile, he dropped the BIG FOOT squirrel down before giving his fur a few quick licks
Post by leafblossom on Jul 14, 2015 7:07:56 GMT -5
(I thought the Big Foot was a rabbit? XD )
Badgerpaw nodded, his expression serious. "I know," he whispered, "that's why I'm telling you."
Blazepaw sighed. "I'm sorry. I don't know what to say to that." What was he supposed to say? He was glad his brother was alright, but couldn't address his eye without reminding him of the accident. Obviously his brother's day was not perfectly fine, but what was he to do?
"My shoulder's fine," Shade replied, though it still bothered him. Not as bad as what happened to Blossom. He returned Spiderpaw's grin. "Nothing much, I'm just staying with the Clan for a while."
Post by Twilightstar on Jul 14, 2015 20:22:07 GMT -5
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(You know what Leaf xD I dont care xD Same difference))
Summerpaw tilted her head at Badgerpaw confused, "When did you see this again?"
Runepaw gave his brother an exasperated look. "Exactly. Anyways, Blaze, I'm going to need your help." He gave his brother a grin, "We're going to work on training me to try and see if I can still fight."
Spiderpaw nodded at Shade, "Do you think me and Briarpaw could stay as well? In the clan?"
Sugar woke up with a yawn, stretching her body out before giving Haze and Blossom a few licks on their head before padding out of the Medicine Cats Den
Lionclaw stood up, before beginning to pad into the Nursery to visit Whitemoon and her kits
Midnight stopped and paused, scenting the air once more. Is that... Sugars scent?
Post by leafblossom on Jul 14, 2015 21:11:40 GMT -5
(XD)
"When he was hunting the Big Footsquirrel rabbit," Badgerpaw explained. "It was almost like he forgot we were there. We hardly even trained."
"Of course you can still fight," Blazepaw replied, returning his brother's grin. "I don't doubt you'll become a great fighter, no matter how many eyes you have."
Shade nodded. "I'm sure it's fine. DawnClan needs more fighters anyway, I have to warn you, there will be a battle with EagleClan soon. I'm sure you've heard of them, the neighboring Clan," he explained. "How come you left RoseClan?"
"Well, RoseClan just isn't for us. It's falling apart and we don't like it there anymore. Simple as that," Briarpaw explained with a shrug. "We heard you came here, and we wanted to come, too." (I just made up a random reason. XD)
Whitemoon had just woken up from a nap and let out a yawn. Her ears twitched at the sound of someone approaching, and she knew who it was by scent, and the way he moved. Whitemoon smiled as Lionclaw entered the den. "How was hunting?" she asked, still a bit bleary from sleep.
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