Blazing Thoughts Only Noticed At Dusk

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This is Blazingsky and Duskwhisker's story. Every chapter the POV will switch to the other, to make it even. 
Tell me if I should continue it!

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PROLOGUE

Darkness.
That was the only thing she could see.
She slowly started to process the sounds she was hearing however, one voice standing out above the rest.
"Great StarClan.. It looks like a badger attack. Quick, Stonefrost, Petalbreeze, go get Lightheart to prepare to help her, Speckledjay, Falconswoop, Help me get her to our camp." He gasped as he saw the RiverClan cat bleeding and unconcious, then told everyone what to do quickly.
Stonefrost and Petalbreeze ran to the camp to tell their medicine cat, Lightheart, about the situation.
Her eyes slowly fluttered open, looking up at the cat whos name she did not know yet, but then slowly closed them again, tired, weak, and dizzy.

CHAPTER UNO

She slowly, and barely opened her eyes for a moment, looking around the warm den. She was in ThunderClan nursery, however she did not know that. She could not speak, and she could not understand the mews being said from her mother and one of the other queens.
Her sibling from an older litter came into the den to say hi to his mother, and noticed Blazingkit. 
"Her eyes are open a teeny bit." He said out loud, causing their mother, Softlight, to look over to see Blazingkit with her eyes barely open, but her eyesight was blurry at the moment.
Blazingkit mewled out as she closed them again, and feebly made an attempt to crawl over to her mother for milk, and fell over one of her siblings, Willowkit. She was the runt of her litter, but she luckily survived with the attempts of the medicine cat to revive her at birth.
"I think shes hungry, Softlight." Redpaw meowed to his mother with a little chuckle.
Softlight rolled her eyes at Redpaw, and gently picked up Blazingkit by the scruff, causing her to wail in surprise. She quickly put her down next to her stomach, and Blazingkit quickly started to suckle.
"Hehe.. Kittens are really cute, Softlight." Redpaw chuckled at his little sister, and sat down since he was off training for the day. 
When Blazingkit was done suckling, she crawled slowly over to Redpaw, flopping onto his paws dramatically. "Awwwh." Redpaw licked her head gently, and Softlight purred as she watched, glad that even though she was the runt she'd have a good friend in her family.

However, she would not be with her family for much longer.
Growls and crys were heard from the camp center suddenly, and a highpitched howl soon started afterwards.
Redpaw poked his head outside the bush that was known as the nursery, and his eyes widened at the sight. "We need to get the kits away quickly! Some foxes just got in camp!" He said, his eyes still wide, and Softlight scrambled up in surprise, the other queen surprised as well. "Fernpetal, we gotta get you out first, your going to give birth soon and you cant risk it!" Softlight mewed urgently, ushering the queen out of the back of the nursery where a small hole in the bush lay for emergencys like this. "Ill get Blazingkit and Ashkit, Can you get Willowkit and Firekit?" Redpaw asked his mother, quickly grabbing Blazingkit and Ashkit by the scruff, happy that they were still tiny. "Alright." Softlight meowed back, and grabbed her other two kits, them quickly escaping as the foxes came into the nursery.

But the foxes werent going to let them leave.
At least, without losing someone.
Redpaw gasped as he felt tight jaws around his hind leg, causing Ashkit to fall next to Softlight and Blazingkit a little farther away. 
Softlight's eyes widened, seeing the danger, But she would be too late. Another fox quickly picked Blazingkit up to take them with them as a snack for later, while the other quickly ate Ashkit. "No!" She yowled, and bolted for the fox that took Blazingkit, almost catching it, but it was too fast for her, disappearing in the forest. Redpaw quickly gathered Firepaw and Willowpaw, sprinting to her mother since his leg was now hurt. 
"My kits... Oh Ashkit.. Blazingkit.. They'll die!" She wailed out in sadness, and Redpaw softly nodded at her as a sign.
She bolted off quickly, on the trail of the fox to attempt to find it.
She would never find it, But she would see Blazingkit someday.
She promised herself that. 

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I WILL CONTINUE, AND PUT THE NEXT CHAPTERS AS REPLIES TO THIS THREAD! However, Should I continue this or do it as a screenshot story on WCUT? Or just stop alltogether? Please tell me the truth about it, I want to know so I can make it better for you all!

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No, you should definitely continue!

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Alrighty! Ill probably write Chapter Dos later. Yes, im going to make every Chapter title in spanish. XD

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CHAPTER DOS!
Hope you like it!
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CHAPTER DOS
Duskpaw yawned as he awoke, seeing the other two apprentices, Barkpaw and Cherrypaw, still sleeping. He got up and stretched, flicking his black ears as he exited the apprentice's den, seeing his mentor, Wolfheart, sunbathing. "Wolfheart?" He called her name gently, awaking her from her trance.
"Oh, yes?" She replied, flicking her ears in annoyance that her nap was disturbed.
"What are we going to be doing today?" He asked curiously, forgetting about yesterday's talk.
"Dont you remember? You, Barkpaw, and Cherrypaw get a break from training or doing anything today since you guys helped the most with tracking down that fox pack and getting them out of our territory." She purred at his forget of the talk that he and the other apprentices had with their mentors.
"Oh. I guess ill go hunt though, I dont wanna be a sitting bird doing nothing." He meowed back, and padded to the entrance, the sand under his paws warm and nice as he exited the camp, and soon he was out of the hollow in the ground all together.
He hunted in pure slience, catching multiple rabbits and a thrush when the scent of fox hit his nostrils, and he heard a soft, highpitched wail.
That... That wasnt too far off! He thought, and quickly dug a hole for his prey, sloppily covering it back up with the dirt, and ran to the direction of it, the scent of fox getting stronger as he neared it.
He peeked through some bushes to see a fox, holding a small kit captiave as if it was to be a snack.
He growled, and despite being only an apprentice he foolishly went for it, leaping at the fox and attacking it with his teeth and claws.
The fox let out a yowl of surprise, and kicked him off after a second of regrouping. It lashed out at him, biting his front left shoulder and thrashing him about, but suddenly stopped. It sniffed the air, and then ran away quickly, and before Duskpaw had known what was going on, He was cornered by two twolegs, whom were taking a walk. "Woah, mama, those cats are really hurt!" The twoleg kit said, though he could not understand their sounds. The big one which he thought was the mother of the kit went towards him, and he hissed, lashing his tail and pumping his fur up to look more scary. "You get the kitten, Mia, and ill get this bigger one." She said to her daughter, and took off her jacket, quickly picking up Duskpaw with it and cradling him in it. He hissed and lashed around, Scared by the twolegs. He saw the littler one pick up the kitten, and he yowled out suddenly, "Dont touch her you stupid twolegs! Dont get your scent on her! I need her scent to find her mother!!" Which was interpreted by the mother as something was wrong with this cat. "Maybe we can keep the kitten, but this one once fixed up has to come back here." The mother told her daughter, and Mia jumped up suddenly, excited she would have a kitten to play with.

They walked back to their car, and drove off to get them treated at the vet.
How am I going to get out of this and have that kit with me? He thought, sitting in the back of the car with the kitten, tightly curled around it to protect it. The little twoleg kit tried to pick the kitten up, and he growled at her, pawing at her hand but without claws since it was just a twoleg kit.
"Mama, the bigger one is mean and wont let me have my kitten." She whined to her mother.
"Well maybe its the kittens sibling, but I dont think its big enough to be its father." She said back, getting it all wrong since of course the twolegs knew nothing about feral cats like the ones in the clans.

Duskpaw sighed softly as he started to get tired, and licked the wound on his shoulder gingerly, the blood staining the jacket that the mother put around him.
The kittens eyes opened just barely, showing two amber eyes. It wailed out when it realised it wasnt with its mother, and Duskpaw licked its head to try to soothe it, but he didnt know much on how to soothe a crying kit.
"Can you speak, Kit? Whats your name?" Duskpaw tried to question her, wondering if she even knew her name seeing as how young she was. He also sniffed at her fur, and his eyes grew wide as he realised it was a thunderclan kit, but the scent was masked greatly by the foxes and then the twolegs.
She looked up at him, and meowed the only thing she knew how to form on her tongue.
"Blazing..." She struggled to mew her name, and as Duskpaw questioned her more, he realised that was the only thing she could say, meaning she probably didnt understand him at all.
As they reached the Vet's office, his eyes widened in panic.
He held the kitten by the scruff, refusing to let the twolegs touch her more as he and her were carried in, getting immediate care with the injuries they had.
"Ma'am? There both feral cats, but with how young that kitten is it would be possible for you to own it. I dont think that the older one would take kindly to living with humans, or leaving the kitten behind though." He told her, Duskpaw knocked out by the needle the vet had to use to put sleep chemicals in him to get him to stop moving while treating him, but the kitten just needed some minor things on its back.
"Alright, we'll keep the kitten, should we just return the larger cat to where it was at? If its feral it can hunt, and it was in the forest." She said, not wanting to put a cat in a pound, ever.
"You can if you want, its your decision how they end up since your the one who brought them in here." He told her, and got a carrier box for the cats, putting them both in the same large one. "I'd suggest not trying to part them for now, they're not related but by what you say the larger one did he must be trying to protect it." He suggested, and took the money he was paid as the little girl and the mother walked away.
"Thank you, Dr..." The mother turned around,
"Dr. Wells." He said, and went to go treat another sick or hurt animal.

Duskpaw slowly awoke in the cat carrier, startled by it, and by how it was being moved. He curled up around the kit whom he realised was Blazingkit, by the only word she would struggle to mew.
"This is gonna be awhile little kit, but I promise im gonna get you back to the clans someday." He gently mewed to the kit, and licked her head to try to soothe her since she was wailing again.
How am I gonna keep that promise? He thought.

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I MUST READ MORE!

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Lol ill try to put an update every day, but I might not be able to tomorrow and for some days. Im going to my mum's and she doesnt have internet, and she doesnt have a computer.
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