Should I write Hawkstar's Past?
Sept 21, 2015 18:57:30 GMT -5
Post by ✦☾Brave☽✦ on Sept 21, 2015 18:57:30 GMT -5
Hey guys,
I was just wondering if you'd be interested in reading Hawkstar's Past?
[Lightningstar>Hawkstar>Jaystar>Bravestar>
]
Hawkstar's Past
It's the night after a horrendous snowstorm, a Lightningclan patrol is marking the border when they come across what appears to be a dead kit, inspecting closely, they discover the kit is alive, but barely. Upon spending several days in the medicine cat den having recovered from hypothermia, a queen who had recently kitted, losing all but one of her kits takes him in.
Hawkkit is his decided name.
He grows up without knowing his mother or father, and is thrown into a vicious war raging on between the Clans, Lightningclan, Rainclan, Iceclan, and Earthclan. The war takes many lives, the Clans' devastated and on edge. Meanwhile, Hawkpaw loses his foster mother and is grief stricken, receiving his warrior name as Hawknose. He soon falls for a beautiful she-cat by the name of Iceheart who was there for him through it all. He believes he can overcome anything with her, and she appears to feel the same.
One night, he's out taking a stroll when he comes across Earthclan scent, it is revealed to be Earthstar who then confronts him, the tom is then made aware that his father is Earthstar, and his mother Rainstar. He finds that night he had fallen behind, but his mother had to save the kits, so she left him there to die. He's horrified to discover Earthstar being his father, the leader known as one of the most ruthless leaders to live even to present day Clans. He fears falling in his father's pawsteps, and tries to avoid him at all costs.
Unbeknownst to Hawknose, Iceheart has been seeing another cat, and the young warrior is shocked to one night find the two lovers together where he runs off for a few days, until Iceheart's sister, Bluestream tracks him down. Iceheart apologizes , and Hawknose begins a downward spiral into depression.
A moon later, at the end of the gathering, he sees Earthstar and Rainstar arguing, his father then pulling him aside as he's leaving, asking him if he'd join Earthclan, and if he would, he promises to make him deputy. Hawknose rejects the offer, not wanting anything to do with Earthstar.
Moons pass, and Hawknose and Bluestream grow close; becoming mates. Hawknose is happier than he could ever be, depression's grip on him has loosened. Then one night, Earthclan invades. Earthstar attacks Bluestream, and threatens to kill her if Hawknose doesn't adhere to his demands. The deputy, Appletail, witnesses the scene, and pulls away Earthclan, telling Bluestream to run before he is brutally slain by Earthstar. Hawknose is named the new deputy.
After that encounter, Hawknose is left highly fearful of his father, though goes on with his normal deputy duties. A few moons in, Bluestream becomes pregnant and kits two lovely kits, a tom and she-cat.
Lightningstar is growing older, and not two seasons after Hawknose is made deputy, he takes his place as leader after Lightningstar dies of blackcough. Hawkstar grapples with his new responsibilities as leader, and eventually becomes known as the greatest leader in existence.
It's a lot more detailed than just that, and especially after him becoming leader, but I don't want to him away that much. I'd also include a few chapters of what happens with his siblings.
So, should I do it? It'd be very lengthy.
I was just wondering if you'd be interested in reading Hawkstar's Past?
[Lightningstar>Hawkstar>Jaystar>Bravestar>
]Hawkstar's Past
It's the night after a horrendous snowstorm, a Lightningclan patrol is marking the border when they come across what appears to be a dead kit, inspecting closely, they discover the kit is alive, but barely. Upon spending several days in the medicine cat den having recovered from hypothermia, a queen who had recently kitted, losing all but one of her kits takes him in.
Hawkkit is his decided name.
He grows up without knowing his mother or father, and is thrown into a vicious war raging on between the Clans, Lightningclan, Rainclan, Iceclan, and Earthclan. The war takes many lives, the Clans' devastated and on edge. Meanwhile, Hawkpaw loses his foster mother and is grief stricken, receiving his warrior name as Hawknose. He soon falls for a beautiful she-cat by the name of Iceheart who was there for him through it all. He believes he can overcome anything with her, and she appears to feel the same.
One night, he's out taking a stroll when he comes across Earthclan scent, it is revealed to be Earthstar who then confronts him, the tom is then made aware that his father is Earthstar, and his mother Rainstar. He finds that night he had fallen behind, but his mother had to save the kits, so she left him there to die. He's horrified to discover Earthstar being his father, the leader known as one of the most ruthless leaders to live even to present day Clans. He fears falling in his father's pawsteps, and tries to avoid him at all costs.
Unbeknownst to Hawknose, Iceheart has been seeing another cat, and the young warrior is shocked to one night find the two lovers together where he runs off for a few days, until Iceheart's sister, Bluestream tracks him down. Iceheart apologizes , and Hawknose begins a downward spiral into depression.
A moon later, at the end of the gathering, he sees Earthstar and Rainstar arguing, his father then pulling him aside as he's leaving, asking him if he'd join Earthclan, and if he would, he promises to make him deputy. Hawknose rejects the offer, not wanting anything to do with Earthstar.
Moons pass, and Hawknose and Bluestream grow close; becoming mates. Hawknose is happier than he could ever be, depression's grip on him has loosened. Then one night, Earthclan invades. Earthstar attacks Bluestream, and threatens to kill her if Hawknose doesn't adhere to his demands. The deputy, Appletail, witnesses the scene, and pulls away Earthclan, telling Bluestream to run before he is brutally slain by Earthstar. Hawknose is named the new deputy.
After that encounter, Hawknose is left highly fearful of his father, though goes on with his normal deputy duties. A few moons in, Bluestream becomes pregnant and kits two lovely kits, a tom and she-cat.
Lightningstar is growing older, and not two seasons after Hawknose is made deputy, he takes his place as leader after Lightningstar dies of blackcough. Hawkstar grapples with his new responsibilities as leader, and eventually becomes known as the greatest leader in existence.
It's a lot more detailed than just that, and especially after him becoming leader, but I don't want to him away that much. I'd also include a few chapters of what happens with his siblings.
So, should I do it? It'd be very lengthy.
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