Yuck! a kittypet! (A story of a kittypet and a clan)

[🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄]

Hello! This is a story much like Fireheart and Longtail's rivalry
So? What's going to happen? I have a basic plot so sit down and eat your salad! Or chocolate! You decide!



Allegiances:


MountainClan:

Leader: Applestar, A tabby Tom with a mid ginger base and slightly darker stripes with very light green eyes. Secretive and cruel but cunning and witty also.



Deputy: Dovesong, A pure white shecat with dark Amber eyes. Sweet and talkative. Foolish and cowardly.


Medicine cat:

Sandberry, a light tan shecat with light blue eyes. She is calm and clever but disloyal and sneaky.

Apprentice:

Bluepaw, a blue-gray Tom with dark yellosmw eyes. Just and helpful. But scattered brain and soft.


Warriors:

Graystrike, a tabby shecat with a mid Gray base and lighter Gray stripes and light green eyes. Brave and just, easily distracted and strick.


Firetail, a tabby Tom with dark ginger base and barely darker stripes and light yellow eyes. Loyal and clever but hateful and infantile.



Leafpool, a tabby shecat with light brown base and mid brown stripes with very dark green eyes. Calm, gentle, childish and whiny.



Apprentices:

Snowpaw, a pure white ton with light Amber eyes. Loyal, calm. Closed minded, stupid.



Queens:

Cherryhaven, a tortoise shell shecat with dark blue eyes she had mostly ginger with little patches of black on her. Strong willed and loyal. Strick and hasty.



Kits: Rabbitkit, brown tabby Tom with dark brown base and mid brown stripes with light blue eyes. Sweet, gentle. Soft weak willed.


Stormkit,s a tabby shecat with light gray base and mud Gray stripes with dark yellow eyes. Strong willed and cunning. Hateful and bossy.



Elders: Pigeonfeather, a tabby Tom with dark gray base and very light gray stripes and light blue eyes. Likeable and gentle, soft and wimpy.




And out hero, Moons!

A tabby shecat with light gray base and slightly darker Gray stripes. Dark green eyes. Clever and just. Self hating and soft.



Family! Applestar is father to Firetail!

Cherryhaven is mother to Stormkit and Rabbit, Firetail is father.


Prolouge comin' soon!

[beech]

Just to let you know!: "strick" is actually spelled "S-t-r-I-c-t".

[🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄]

Oops, eheh. Sorry 'bout that.


Prologue:


The suffocating heated air burned at the pelt of a small Gray tabby shecat who was sitting on the short, thick carpet. She lowered her head to her chest brought out her bright pink tongue to push it against her chest, efficiently cooling her down. The tabby heard a cringe, and a twoleg calling her name "Moon! Moon!". Moon got up fairly quickly and padded to the sound of the twoleg's voice who was still calling. As she reached the strange creature she saw the door open, and charged outside as the twoleg closed the door. The slam of the door slightly fazed Moon but she recovered quickly. She looked around and saw a mouse scurrying around, she lowered herself and slowly stepped forward. She was hovering above the gray creature and carefully lifted up her paw stroke it. Her class cut the skin aftershaving off some fur, and scarlet liquid covered the tips of her claws. The mouse let out a warning wail and Moon cringed at the loud sound, pushing on the startled creature's neck producing a crack. Moon snatched her paw up to her face and rasped her tongue on the red tips of her claws, turning them a snowy white with a hint of pink. /How could they want to take my claws?/ the tabby thought to herself and cringed. Suddenly a firey Tom lunged at the fence with a smirk on his face. "Hello." he coolly purred.. "U..um Hi..." Moon shyly replied. "You're in huge danger, and so am I." The ginger tom snickered Moon replied with a mew "What?". The Tom explained " My clan is short on apprentices and you will be killed by your twolegs! So come with me!" Moon was about to disagree with rustling came from the other side of the house. "Oh no! Quickly!" The Tom couldn't help snickering a bit as he picked up Moon by the scruff and plunged into the wild. On the way Moon asked many questions. "What is your name? Mine is Moon." He replied with "Applestar, and your name will change soon.". Whe n they arrived at the cave at the tip of a mountain. Moon shivered and was tossed into a hollowed rock. " Sleep for now, sunhigh is soon." Ordered Applestar as he rushes off. Moon obeyed and curled up, sleeping easily as she was exhausted.

[🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄]

beech can you give me a critique of the prologue please?