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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2017 9:34:53 GMT -5
Ripple padded through the cold snow.She had no home,No friends,No family, and no food.She was starving!With each step, she grew more exhausted.She came to a clearing.A female she-cat with light blue fur and white flecks like snow in her pelt padded up to her.She dropped the mouse she was carrying and pushed it over to Ripple."Eat now, talk later"She said as Ripple was about to start her introductions.Ripple dug into it's warm flesh."It's delicious!!"Ripple said with a mouthful of food as she dug in for more."I'm Leafstorm," the she-cat said, her icy blue eyes twinkling like a thousand stars."Who are you?""I'm Ripple"Ripple replied, wondering where Leafstorm was from."Very well then,"Leafstorm said digging into the snow"Would you like to come with me to my clan,SpiritClan?We have food,water,shelter and healing."  A:Come with this new cat to her camp B:Ask a few questions first but then follow C:Fight the strange cat who offered to take you in and has food(Seriously?!She has food!!!) D:Decline the offer and let Ripple starve.(Your a really mean person) |
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Post by ~~Honeyflower~~ on Jul 8, 2017 12:22:09 GMT -5
A. Why not? She seems nice enough. If she wanted to kill us, she could have just left us to die. And that wouldn't be much of a storyline, so I'm guessing you want the answer to be A.
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Post by 86 on Jul 8, 2017 13:57:34 GMT -5
B. Even though it seems like a nice offer, it's still best to be on alert. We don't know if this is a trap or not.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2017 7:31:03 GMT -5
B: Ask questions first and then follow "Well,where is SpiritClan and do cats live there?"Ripple asked Leafstorm,eager to get some answers"Well,yes.SpiritClan makes it's home on the abandoned thunderpath"Leafstorm ran toward the direction of the thunderpath,and Ripple,in spite of a broken leg, did her best to follow.  "Wait!"Ripple called limping through the snow"I broke my leg."Leafstorm turned around and ran back.She asked how and said she was the camp's medicine cat.Ripple thanked her as she wrapped her leg in cobwebs."Well then,"Suppose you can't run then."Leafstorm Replied."No,"Ripple said sadly "Come with meeeee" a voice said "and all your troubles will be solved"Ripple felt a pang in her side.She looked and saw a claw in her side.She fell to the ground."L..Leafstorm...Help me...""No!"Leafstorm screeched.Ripple saw a cat who's tiger pelt splattered with blood told her this cat wanted to kill.Leafstorm took this cat down in 3 hits.And then Ripple blacked out.
 Ripple awoke to the smell of a fresh caught mouse."Oh!Good, your awake!"Leafstorm said cheerfully"Can you stand for me please?"Ripple tried to get up but her leg was too weak.She shook her head."That's ok."Leafstorm said"But what matters is when you would like a tour of the clan.This is my den.The medicine cat den.When do you want the tour?" A:Now!when Ripple knows her new clan, she needs to know her clanmates too! B:Learn about Ripple's clanmates first, then take the tour,Seems fair C:Learn what Ripple can do to help after her leg's better, then take the tour D:Creativity.com stopped working.Temporary technical difficulties.please stand by. |
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Post by 86 on Jul 9, 2017 11:37:38 GMT -5
B.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2017 17:06:44 GMT -5
 maybe idea for new cyoa?! |
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Post by Ezio Auditore da Firenze on Jul 12, 2017 2:46:36 GMT -5
B.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 14, 2017 18:08:16 GMT -5
why thank you! B:Learn about Ripple's clanmates first, then take the tour,Seems fair Ripple sighed and asked to learn about her clan mates, though she wanted to hunt. Leafstorm began:"Shade came as a kitten on a dark and stormy night,when we were huddled into our dens"Ripple wanted to ask how shade got his name, but held back."We heard a yowl with an echo like a endless cave and looked in the direction of it.We saw cat as black as night with a bright green collar that matched her eyes.'My name is Nightecho.'the she-cat said with a lowered head.'Take my son.'you could see tears coming from beneath her shadowed eyes.She dropped a bundle of white fur.  'He will be grey when older.' she said.She then turned and ran away and the cats could hear her sobs.'Well,who's this?'Pebbleclaw asked,Pointing to the kit. 'No name...' Lightpaw pointed out 'Let's take him in.' Said a Shadowclan cat, who was spying to see if our clan had enough prey to steal.'Shadowclan could use the cats' snarled a tom who came from a bush nearby. Shade is Ripple's long lost mate!!! The white kit was snatched by the Shadowclan cat as my mentor Petalpelt,ran at the cat, knocking the kit from his mouth.He snatched it up again and ran to his camp.Our cats retreated.The kit was lost.A moon later, he came to us.Saying he met a rouge named Ripplepaw and he loved her.He became mates with her.He snuck any prey he caught to her.One day, with a thrush in his mouth he was about to give it to Ripplepaw(Now Ripple)when his mentor caught him,banshing him into exile.He came back to us!He wanted to stay!We named him Shade because of his coat.He built a den for himself, and you,Ripple.He brought your kit,Snow, with him.Go on!Go say hi!Come on, do it! A:Go see shade!He's your long lost mate!Don't you remember him? B:Continue listening to Leafstorm about you new clan, forgetting shade. |
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Post by Ezio Auditore da Firenze on Jul 15, 2017 5:29:22 GMT -5
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Post by Latte on Jul 15, 2017 14:27:35 GMT -5
A
Why not have a happy reunion??
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Post by 🐾Wavestar🐾 on Jul 16, 2017 0:46:05 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 16, 2017 13:56:26 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2017 8:15:53 GMT -5
Dear everyone,I am doing another cyoa it is called Nightecho's Farewell!Go check it out! untoldtales.proboards.com/thread/33318/nightechos-farewell-cyoaA:Go see shade!He's your long lost mate!Don't you remember him? Ripple limped over to Shade's den.She wanted to say hello again to him.She brushed through the low hanging branches."YOU?!OUT,LEAFSTORM!!!""Shade?It's me,Ripple,"YOU?!?!?!?!?!oh come in.""Hi.."Ripple said shyly to Shade,hopeing he didn't see her broken leg."Snow has greencough."He said,"Can you go get me some herbs for her?"  What should Ripple do? A:Get herbs for your kit B:Kill the kit with deathberrys C:Kill the kit by leaving it to die NOTE:B and C will cause you to loose your kit and your mate.Ripple is lonely as it is! |
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Post by 🐾Wavestar🐾 on Jul 17, 2017 8:36:23 GMT -5
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The kit is RIPPLE'S KIN!! She shouldn't kill it!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2017 8:37:58 GMT -5
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