ForestClan's Ashes

[Ezio Auditore da Firenze]

This is a book about one of my Clans, Forestclan. Here you'll read about it's past. You can also join in the role-play I made for it.

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Prolouge

Forestry walked around. She knew this forest well. Behind her, nine rogues followed her. One of the rogues, a white tabby tom with amber eyes and a scar on his muzzle, slowed down a lot. He then collapsed. Forestry stopped. So did the rogues. Forestry padded to the fallen rogue and sniffed him. "Romeo's dead." she announced. One of the rogues, a gray tabby she-cat with green eyes, screamed in horror. "Not Romeo!!" she yelled, her voice echoing back. "Cloud, you know very well he was sick and wouldn't even make it." a dark-pelted rogue with gleaming amber eyes crossly meowed. "Romeo was a weakling anyway, he was just another mouth to feed." he added. Cloud looked at him and her sister, Rainy, who's blue-white pelt glimmered in the poking sunlight. "Not true!" they both mewed. Forestry rolled her eyes. "If we continue like this, we'll never reach the hollow!" she growled. The meowing died away. Cloud and the dark-pelted rogue picked up Romeo's dead body, showing respect.
Soon they reached a not too big sandy hollow. Some rocks were piled close to the lowest part and a cliff hanged over the camp. There were some dens dug out by a big animal. The rogues settled in the dens. It was way past dusk. Cloud and Rainy, joined by Forestry, carried Romeo to a place where sunlight would get through the branches. They buried him under a huge, tall maple tree and walked back to the hollow - their 'camp'.

[GUESTtheGuest]

(You really need to practice your art more, first, the gray cat with white patches looks like he had a serious brain damage, also the cats looks so disproportionate, that they can be easily mistaken for other animal, but those are the things that bothers me a lot, i don't want to write so much)

[Ezio Auditore da Firenze]

I know. I should've first drawn it on paper, then used my drawing tablet. But thanks for the review! I'm already working on Chapter 1.

[Ezio Auditore da Firenze]

Chapter 1

Forestry woke up the following morning. Her friends were silent. Ashy, the dark rogue, was lying alone on the Rockpile. Forestry ran over to him and shoved him off. "My friends!" she yowled. Her friends looked up to her in a little confusion. Forestry pretended it never happened. "We are staying here, so we need to make sure we have a safe camp. Understand? Next, we only have two scrawny mice. It is not enough. Three of us need to go hunting." As soon as she finished, Ashy, a white she cat with dark silver stripes and ice blue eyes and Rainy all wanted to go hunting. However, only one rogue volunteered to get some bracken, brambles, twigs and branches and leaves for the camp. The rest of them thought hard. "No one wants to join Pool?" Forestry meowed, a little surprised. She thought they'd be happy to help her. But, by the looks of things, it wasn't true. Then, the sun hid behind the clouds and rain started pouring down on them. Wind picked up its speed. "This is why we need to get everything done!" Forestry yowled, trying to be heard above the thundering sound of rain. Three cats immediately meowed. "We're with Pool!" The cats left, but the rain didn't. Instead, it got stronger. The cats that stayed ran to the dens to hide and and wait out the rain. Forestry was the last to hide.

[SpookertheCat]

Sept 27, 2017 10:55:21 GMT -5 GUESTtheGuest said:

(You really need to practice your art more, first, the gray cat with white patches looks like he had a serious brain damage, also the cats looks so disproportionate, that they can be easily mistaken for other animal, but those are the things that bothers me a lot, i don't want to write so much)

I think the cats look fine. Wpuld you please draw something better?

[Ezio Auditore da Firenze]

Dunno, but I can try. Thanks for the review!