Post by 🌹Jayjaycats🌹 on Jan 28, 2019 0:29:06 GMT -5
Prologue:
Petalkit sat at the bottom of Tallrock with her litter-mate Berrykit. "I wish Sparrowstar would hurry up. Dont you?" She meowed quietly to her brother. Berrykit looked anxiously up at the leader, "I dont think he wants us in the clan. Haven't you seen the way he looks at us since mother di-" He stopped when he saw his sisters glare. "Sorwy," He mumbled looking at his paws. Petalkit sighed and nuzzled him, "Look! Sparrowstar is ready!" She whisper yelled, sitting up and puffing out her chest importantly. "Berrykit, Petalkit come forwards. Berrykit you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Berrypaw. Your mentor will be Robinwing. I hope she will pass down all she knows on to you. Robinwing, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You have shown yourself to be smart and a great fighter. You will be the mentor of Berrypaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to him." Sparrowstar said looking down at his new apprentice and mentor. He looks at Petalkit and beconds her forwards. "Petalkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Petalpaw. Your mentor will be Silverfur. I hope Silverfur will pass down all she knows on to you." He mews then looks down at a fluffy brown shecat. "Silverfur, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You have shown yourself to be loyal and witty. You will be the mentor of Petalpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to her." Petalpaw touches noses with her mentor and flattens her ears in bliss as her clan mates call out her brothers and her names.
Chapter 1 "Petalpaw, come on. Grasspelt says you and I are on the dawn patrol." Someone whispers close to Petalpaws ear. "Go away, I did the dusk patrol and didnt come back till midnight." She grumbles crossly. A tongue licks across her cheek and she blinks in surprise. Redpaw nuzzles her gently, urging her up. "Grasspelt says you will build good stamina doing this. You said you wanted to be the best warrior ever, didnt you?" He mews softly. "Stupid furball. That doesnt mean I want to die trying," She hisses but stands up slowly and follows Redpaw out of the den. Soft rays of morning light peak through the clouds that seem to strangle it. Petalpaw closes her eyes and pretends she is gliding across the grass, faster then any cat before her. She suddenly grows wings and- "Finally! I've been waiting for ages." Someone snaps, breaking into her thoughts. Petalpaw opens her eyes to see Redpaws mentor standing in front of her. "Have some compassion Grasspelt, I remember you sleeping in till sunhigh." A brown tom with long ears retorts. "Lets get going. Petalpaw I know Silverfur isnt with us, shes in the nursery. Yes, yes. She is expecting my kits. Dont worry though, Greeneye will be taking mentoring you now." The tom rambles on, much to Petalpaws dislike. Greeneye! Doesn't Rabbitears know she hates me? "My new apprentice finally up, is she? Well lets get going, its too cold to stand here like startled rabbits!" A grey she-cat yowls to the gathered group. The she-cat storms across the camp and heads to the entrance, with her clanmates at her heels. Petalpaw tries desperately to keep up with her short stubby legs. The older apprentice, Redpaw, slows down and matches her pace. His dark ginger fur rubbing against her fur made her warmer against the freezing weather. The grey she-cat turns around and glares at Petalpaw with bright green eyes. "Hurry up Petalpaw. Stop being so slow!" She growls and walks faster. Petalpaw huffs with annoyance as Redpaw smirks besides her. "Comeon, Greeneye just wants to get back to camp and flirt with Icecrystal." He mews as Petalpaw stares astonished at him. "Fff...flirt? With Icecrystal? What do you mean?" She stutters. "Oh, comeon. Everycat knows that Greeneye and Icecrystal has been together more often. Whitefur is happy because she thinks Greeneye will have kits soon and she won't be so lonely." He mews to her oblivious to her embarrassed pelt. Would father really do that? Could he really forget about Breezesong, my mother!? Thoughts and questions played with her mind all through the patrol, and still when she had gotten back to camp, she had no answers to her questions. As she entered the camp she saw that Redpaw was right. Whitefur was sitting at the front of the nursery staring happily across the camp as her kit, Littlekit, played happily at her paws. Petalpaw followed the queens gaze and found it resting on Icecrystal. Greeneye had bounded into camp and was snuggling into the toms soft white fur. Icecrystal was murmuring softly to her and looking at her happily. Curious, Petalpaw walked around the white tom and the grey she-cat and hid behind some ferns to hear them. "-KIts? We have been mates for 3 moons now..." Her father was saying to the grey shecat. Petalpaw leaned in more intensely as Icecrystal paused before continuing. "But I think you're right. Leafbare is turning into Newleaf and litters of kits are needed. Plus, I want a new litter. My first one didnt really end up well, did it?" Petalpaw sucked in a breathe and hissed quietly. He means me and Berrypaw! Whats wrong with us? Greeneye cuddled Icecrystal again, "Well, I will try and make Petalpaw a warrior you could be proud of. I would be dumb to have useless cats in the clan wouldn't it? At least she is good at hunting, have you watched your son lately, Berrypaw basically trips over his prey and is a useless fighter." Petalpaw winched at the she-cats comment. Icecrystal looked sharply at Greeneye, "Dont think I passed it on to them! Their mother was totally useless and you were just a 'paw by the time I wanted to have a family. Breezesong was the only she-cat ready to be a queen, and she wanted kits all the time. Remember when we were paws and she basically begged me to have kits with her. Lucky you found us in the apprentice den or else there would have been one pregnant apprentice!" He joked while Greeneye's eyes gleamed. "Oh yes, I remember. You were just about to try when I raced into the den wailing about a thorn in my paw. Comeon, there's no-one here." She begged him. Petalpaw scanned the camp. It was true, Whitefur and her kit were in the nursery and their clanmates were either eating freshkill or on a patrol. No-one would be able to see what was about to happen just behind the medicine cats den. Petalpaw's eyes widened in horror as she looked back at her father and her mentor. ... 1 moons later ... Petalpaw yowled loudly with the rest of her clan and called out the new warriors names. "Redtail! Morningflower!" She cheered happily. It would be 1 more moon till she also got her warrior name and she was excited. Greeneye had moved into the nursery a day ago, pregnant with Icecrystals kits, and Petalpaw had gotten a new mentor. Harespring. The ginger tom had joked with the clan that he too was going to have kits like Petalpaws two former mentors. Harespring nudged Petalpaw out of her thought and pushed her towards the newly named Redtail. "Go on. Looks like someone wants you," he teased lightly before padding up to talk with Morningflower. Petalpaw approached Redtail shyly and nuzzled his cheek softly. "Congrates, you are finally a full warrior!" She mews, gently purring. Redtail nuzzles her back and licks her nose, "I guess I'll have to wait for you to become a warrior. Untill then I will dig a den big enough for both of us and wait for, Petalfur, Petalpelt, Petalstream? to join me." ... 1 moon later again ... Petalpaw lifted her prey happily between her jaws and starts towards the camp. Bracken parts gently and Harespring pads out. "Great work with the assessment, Petalpaw. Tonight, I hope you get you warrior name with your littermate." He mewed then takes some of her prey and leads the way back to camp. They enter the thorn entrance and a dark ginger tom throws himself at Petalpaw. He licks her roughly on the cheek before grabbing some of her fresh kill and putting it away. Puffing the tom races back to her. "Petalpaw, did you pass!? Please say yes!" The tom whisper-yells. Petalpaw nudes the tom away, "Redtail, ofcource I passed! Now we just have to wait for Sparrowstar to call the clan meeting." Sparrowstar's familiar clan meeting call echoes through the camp. Hastily Petalpaw licks her fur clean and bounds towards Tallrock with Redtail at her side. Whitefur and her kit appear from the nursery with the heavily pregnant Greeneye behind them. Warriors stream towards Sparrowstar and await her instructions.
Last Edit: Mar 8, 2019 6:41:23 GMT -5 by 🌹Jayjaycats🌹
Nickname: Jay Tag with (@)jayjaycats Member since Jan 2019 OCs: Snowbird, Jadeflower, Eclipsemoon, Redfeather, Speckledleaf, Bloodmoon, Waspsting
Lightfeather - Black shecat (Dissing, prideful, secretive)
Icecrystal - White tom (Sensible, dissing, quiet)
Robinwing - Brown shecat (Friendly, shy, soft spoken)
Harespring - Ginger tom (Energetic, helpful, silly) Butterflywing - tortoiseshell shecat with big blue eyes River to stars (Born a kittypet but doesnt know, friendly, cheerful)
Redtail- Dark ginger tom (Flirty, proud, energetic)
Petalheart - Ginger tabby shecat (Friendly, bubbly purrsonality, sometimes shy)
Berryfur - White tom with ginger patches (Soft spoken, shy, patient) Willowfur - Small tabby shecat with blue eyes, has no lower right fang maxils (Curious, friendly, hyper)
Apprentices:
Littlepaw - Grey shecat with (Silly, energetic, loud) Flamepaw - bright orange tabby shecat with green eyes River to stars (shy, really friendly, picky)
Queens:
Whitefur - White shecat full time queen (Friendly, patient, sensible)
Greeneye - Grey shecat with strange bright green eyes (Proud, loud, sometimes mean)
Kits:
Fallowkit - Grey tabby tom (Shy, quiet, friendly)
Snowkit - White tom (naive, silly, dissing)
Elders: Brightstream - Ginger shecat (Quiet, loyal, very pretty)
Post by River to stars on Mar 8, 2019 19:27:49 GMT -5
~I am the one River To Stars~ May i add my ocs Burnpaw and Butterflywing? (if the suffix Butterfly' is not allowed change Butterflywing's name to Beetlewing, you can also change Burnpaw to Flamepaw)
Burnpaw is a bright orange classic tabby she-cat with green eyes, medicine cat app? Her prefix will be 'leaf if that's okay.
Butterflywing is a dilute tortoiseshell she-cat with big blue eyes, warrior. (she was born a kittypet but doesn't know)
Last Edit: Mar 8, 2019 19:29:43 GMT -5 by River to stars
Picture is drawn by: ForsakenSpirits on deviantart
~I am the one River To Stars~ May i add my ocs Burnpaw and Butterflywing? (if the suffix Butterfly' is not allowed change Butterflywing's name to Beetlewing, you can also change Burnpaw to Flamepaw)
Burnpaw is a bright orange classic tabby she-cat with green eyes, medicine cat app? Her prefix will be 'leaf if that's okay.
Butterflywing is a dilute tortoiseshell she-cat with big blue eyes, warrior. (she was born a kittypet but doesn't know)
Sure, will add. Burnpaw - bright orange classical tabby shecat with green eyes (can u tell me their personality? list 3) Butterflywing - dilute tortoiseshell shecat with big blue eyes (Was born a kittypet but doesnt know, plz add 2 personality)
Nickname: Jay Tag with (@)jayjaycats Member since Jan 2019 OCs: Snowbird, Jadeflower, Eclipsemoon, Redfeather, Speckledleaf, Bloodmoon, Waspsting
Willowfur - I give up with describing her. Just go to Spottedleaf's NichtClan thread for a good, long desc with a personality. Also, Spoots left out that she's tiny, so make sure you remember that.
Paw Patrol Paw Patrol We'll be there on the double Whenever there's a problem Around Adventure Bay Ryder and his team of pups Will come and save the day Marshall! Rubble! Chase! Rocky! Zuma! Skye! Yeah! They're on the way! Paw Patrol Paw Patrol Whenever you're in trouble Paw Patrol, Paw Patrol We'll be there on the double No job's too big No pup's too small Paw Patrol! We're on a roll! So here we go! Paw Patrol Whoa-oh-oh Paw Patrol Whoa-oh-oh Paw Patrol Ruff!
ENTRY NUMBER SEVENTEEN DARK DARKER YET DARKER THE DARKNESS KEEPS GROWING THE SHADOWS CUTTING DEEPER PHOTON READINGS NEGATIVE THIS NEXT EXPERIMENT SEEMS VERY VERY INTERESTING ... WHAT DO YOU TWO THINK
Willowfur - I give up with describing her. Just go to Spottedleaf's NichtClan thread for a good, long desc with a personality. Also, Spoots left out that she's tiny, so make sure you remember that.
Paw Patrol Paw Patrol We'll be there on the double Whenever there's a problem Around Adventure Bay Ryder and his team of pups Will come and save the day Marshall! Rubble! Chase! Rocky! Zuma! Skye! Yeah! They're on the way! Paw Patrol Paw Patrol Whenever you're in trouble Paw Patrol, Paw Patrol We'll be there on the double No job's too big No pup's too small Paw Patrol! We're on a roll! So here we go! Paw Patrol Whoa-oh-oh Paw Patrol Whoa-oh-oh Paw Patrol Ruff!
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Nickname: Jay Tag with (@)jayjaycats Member since Jan 2019 OCs: Snowbird, Jadeflower, Eclipsemoon, Redfeather, Speckledleaf, Bloodmoon, Waspsting
Paw Patrol Paw Patrol We'll be there on the double Whenever there's a problem Around Adventure Bay Ryder and his team of pups Will come and save the day Marshall! Rubble! Chase! Rocky! Zuma! Skye! Yeah! They're on the way! Paw Patrol Paw Patrol Whenever you're in trouble Paw Patrol, Paw Patrol We'll be there on the double No job's too big No pup's too small Paw Patrol! We're on a roll! So here we go! Paw Patrol Whoa-oh-oh Paw Patrol Whoa-oh-oh Paw Patrol Ruff!
ENTRY NUMBER SEVENTEEN DARK DARKER YET DARKER THE DARKNESS KEEPS GROWING THE SHADOWS CUTTING DEEPER PHOTON READINGS NEGATIVE THIS NEXT EXPERIMENT SEEMS VERY VERY INTERESTING ... WHAT DO YOU TWO THINK
Post by 🌹Jayjaycats🌹 on Mar 15, 2019 7:17:32 GMT -5
Chapter 2: ...
3 moons later ...
A mouse leaps infront of a pretty she-cat and she races after it. The mouse zig-zags through the bushes nearby while the cat jumps over them effortlessly. The mouse trips over a bush root and the cat sees the opportunity. Her claws itch out and she lungs. The mouse is trapped between her paws and she delivers the killing bite. The mouse squeals. The body is hairy in her mouth and she spits it out. Her eyes go fuzzy before becoming clearer, and the she-cat looks around confused.
The surroundings are different from before and it takes a moment for her to realize that it was a dream. Something tickles her on the back of her head and she turns. A fluffy red tail dances in front of her and she lunges playfully. "Wakeup!" She squeals like an excited kit as a cat emerges from a heap of moss. The cat blinks sleepily and yawns, his fangs showing. "Come on, Redtail, we slept in." The she-cat says, stretching her tabby pelt in the filtered sunlight. Redtail stands up and licks the she-cats face lovingly. "Its alright, Petalheart. No-one will care, we can just say its New-leaf and they will think of something else and not bother us," Redtail mewed winking. Petalheart sighed, "Really, Redtail. You want them to think I'm expecting? No. If they do, then I become a queen and that means sleeping in the nursery with Greeneye and her kits!" She mewed, thinking about her dislike for Greeneye and the she-cats new mate. 3 moons ago, on the night of Petalhearts vigil, Greeneye had delivered her kits. Two toms called Fallowkit and Snowkit. Their father was Petalheart's and Berryfur's father, but their mothers were not the same. 15 moons ago, Icecrystal (Their father) had taken Breezesong, a new warrior, as a mate. Icecrystal did not truly love Breezesong, but used her to have kits. This resulted as Petalheart and Berryfur. Breezesong adored the two, but Icecrystal saw them as useful objects that could make him look great. Once the kits were old enough to eat freshkill, their mother started going on hunting patrols. On one hunting patrol, Breezesong found a squirrel and pursed it. It was a hard chase, as there was no trees, just a sea of rocks and a few bushes. Breezesong had lunged for her prey and a rock had fallen, making her slip other and be crushed. It took a day for the clan to find the body and by then, the she-cat had died. Icecrystal pretended to be upset, but really he was happy as this meant he could freely chose a new mate and create another litter. Petalheart herself had seen Greeneye and Icecrystal officially become mates...
Petalheart blinked annoyed she had wondered off into thoughts. She shook her head and glanced at Redtail, sure enough the tom was staring at her. "What!?" She demands crossly. Redtail looks away ashamed, "Sorry," he mumbles. Petalheart sighs and rubs her head against the toms chin. The two stay like this for a while, grooming eachother and murmuring softly. Then they stand up and walk towards a tunnel in the den. The tunnel is a squeeze but short, and they fit through. Redtail fluffs out his fur grumbling about all the dirt in his claws from digging the den. Outside is a grassy clearing, a few holes dot around the clearing with two bushes near. A bramble wall surrounds the clearing with 2 gaps, 1 leading to open plains, the other to a dirt place. A few strange boulders stand in the center with a crack in the middle, wide enough to fit a cat through.
Petalhearts purrs as the medicine cat apprentice emerges from the rock pile. "Morning Burnpaw!" She mews to the young tabby she-cat. Burnpaw dips her head to the warrior before saying hello and hurrying away, obviously looking for something. Dead prey lay in the center of the clearing, mostly fresh, probably caught this morning in a hunting patrol. Petalheart bounds up to it, eager to eat some food. A thrush lays on top and she picks it.
"Hey!" A small voice says and Petalheart turns to see Littlepaw, a small grey she-cat who had recently become an apprentice. "I was going to take that and share it with Fallowkit and Snowkit!" She mews sadly.
Petalheart mews with laughter, "Fallowkit and Snowkit can't eat this unless Greeneye chews it up and you know that. I bet you were just planning to eat it by yourself."
Littlepaw looks at her guiltily, "Okay, okay. Maybe I am just a greedy furball." Petalheart purrs amused before looking around and spotting a patch of ferns with no-one near.
"Hey, why don't we share this over near those ferns? Come on," She mews picking up the thrush and heading away. She settles down near the ferns with Littlepaw laying by her side. Together the two demolish the fresh-kill and they start sharing tongues. "So hows training going? Rabbitears likes to boast about you so you must be doing well," Petalheart mews.
"Rabbitears' the best mentor! He taught me how to catch a bird yesterday, and today he said he would teach me some battle moves! But apprentice stuff doesn't matter, whats on with you and Redtail? Are you two mates? Will the clan expect some more kits?!" She exclaims. "Oh, kits are just too cute!"
"Oh, we're just good friends," she mews uncomfortable talking about Redtail in front of a young cat.
"Come on, you have to give more than that! Oh look, Willowfur and Butterflywing want to talk to you. I guess I will go see Rabbitears, see ya!" The apprentice mews, bounding away. Petalheart looks up, and sure enough her two friends are padding over. She mews a quick bye to Littlepaw before heading over to the other she-cats.
Willowfur looks at Petalheart with a curious glint in her eye. The she-cats glance around and choose the quietest place and sit there. No cat turn a head to look in their direction, as they all know that the three and Morningflower often gossip there. The three sit in a small triangle before Petalheart asks, "Where's Morningflower?" Willowfur: "Hunting with Harespring ofcourse." Petalheart: "We both know they an't hunting!" Willowfur: "Yerh! So true! But have you seen Butterflywing and your brother. Butterflywing, you need to stop mooning over a tom. I'm sorry but toms are just wastes of time." Butterflywing: rolls eyes "As if I would moon over a tom! Its Petalheart and Redtail we got to look closer at. One of these days, Petalheart, your going to find yourself a swollen belly. And that not because you eat so much." Willowfur: "It will be because you will be expecting Redtails kits." she mews in a matter-of-fact way. Petalheart: "Yerh, I got that thanks Willowfur. I'm not expecting yet, so don't worry!" Butterflywing: "Yet? Are you two planning something at all?" Petalheart blushes and looks away. Willowfur: "Oh she iiiissssss!!!! Tell me, whats ya planning!" Petalheart: "Umm, well, tonight when everyone is at the meeting..." Butterflywing: "Oh! Thats why you two asked not to come, it makes sense now! Smart idea!" Willowfur: "Umm, dumb idea! You two an't the only ones staying! The kits and apprentices are all staying, what if they catch you!? They will be scarred for life," she says dramatically. Petalheart: "Its called making them go to sleep early and making Littlepaw to stand on guard. Dont worry, we got it all planned." Willowfur: Snorts "As if you would get Fallowkit and Snowkit to sleep. They are worse then a herd of badgers!" Butterflywing: "Does it really matter whats happening between the two? I want to talk about Grasspelt and Lightfeather. Have you seen the two? I think there's a new relationship starting." Willowfur: "Ha! You know what that means!? It means that Lightfeather and Petalheart will probably be in the nursery together! Fail!" Petalheart: "Oh, I'm sure their relationship isn't serious. I mean, who would like Lightfeather? She's so mean and arrogant!" Butterflywing: "You know Grasspelt, he thinks all cats are perfect." Sigh "And we all know that's not true." The three hear Rabbitears calling them over. The three pad over to the deputy and sit down. Petalheart spots Redtail, Greeneye, Fallowkit and Snowkit nearby listening to Rabbitears. Petalheart pricks her ears. Rabbitears: "There has been a spotting of a fox family living near The Fallen Oak." He pauses as everyone gasps. "It seems the family is young, but never the less, they are dangerous. Softfur is tending to a bite Robinwing received this morning on patrol." The cats gathered gasped and Petalheart realized that Berryfur and Lightfeather were sitting near the medicine cat den, they had obviously been on patrol with Robinwing. Burnpaw was carrying herbs between the den and the cats before racing back inside to help Softfur. "Poor Burnpaw, imagine carrying all those disgusting herbs in your mouth," Butterflywing shudders, "Yucky!" Willowfur purrs "She wanted to do that, remember she chose to become a medicine cat apprentice." Petalheart looks over at her friends, about to speak when a bundle of fur crash into her torso. "Petalheart! Petalheart! Look at my battle moves, I bet you I could kill those dumb foxes!" A white tom mews loudly. His mother, Greeneye, watches from afar. Another tom-kit, this time a grey tabby, comes bounding up. "Morning Petalheart. Can you play with us? Greeneye and Whitefur are a bit too boring and protective." The grey tabby looks at her with his large eyes. Petalheart sighs dramatically and crouches, "Alright then, who wants a badger ride?" Almost as once her fur is pulled on both sides as the two 3 moon old tom-kits clamber up. Redtail bounds over and the white kitten jumps off Petalhearts back onto his. "Hey, Snowkit! Don't hurt him," she scolds gently. Snowkit looks at her and smirks, "Your not my mother, so you can't make me!" The little tom jumps off Redtail, who shakes out his fur, before running to the medicine cat den. The grey tabby tom flattens himself ontop of Petalheart. "Don't worry Petalheart, I'm not as mousebrained as Snowkit," he mews. Snowkit turns around and glares at his brother, "Mousebrained yourself, Fallowkit!" He stomps up to Lightfeather and starts climbing her back. Petalheart watches as Lightfeather rears up, dislodging Snowkit making him fall to the ground. Lightfeather rounds on him and growls threateningly. Snowkit rolls his eyes as the she-cat scowls him, and pads towards the nursery. "Mousebrain," Fallowkit whispers as he watches his brother go into the den. Petalheart purrs gently, before walking clumsily around camp. Fallowkit squeals with pleasure as he clings onto her back, "Faster, faster!" Redtail bellows with laughter at the sight.
Last Edit: Mar 24, 2019 1:45:03 GMT -5 by 🌹Jayjaycats🌹
Nickname: Jay Tag with (@)jayjaycats Member since Jan 2019 OCs: Snowbird, Jadeflower, Eclipsemoon, Redfeather, Speckledleaf, Bloodmoon, Waspsting