The Rise of Smokeclan (Vixen's Adaptation)

[Wurt the Merm]

Jaymoon, the original creator of The Rise of Smokeclan has given me permission to revamp it as she has given up on it. So.. Here we go!

Smokepelt rushed through the pile of leaves, at least he had prepared..! He hoped that he remembered to finished it.. He heard a yowl close to him.

?: Hey.. You! Save me!

Smokepelt turned his head, fire raging through.
Smokepelt: I'm sorry, i need to run..!
The orange cat nodded, they gave up.. So quickly.. Smokepelt ran off, he needed to save himself.

The smoke-ghost tom already felt terrible, he could have saved the orange tom! But again, him or the fire.

A. Continue rushing to the area.
B. Try to save Brightclaw.
C. Look for supplies.

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

B

[Wurt the Merm]

I decided to run after Brightclaw, there was no time to loose another life!
I jumped into the fire, and dragged Brightclaw along..
I heard.. Branchleaf!?
Branchleaf: Help!
A.. A dog! I can't fight a dog..! But.. But she looks dead.. I needed to return Brightclaw to camp before i can sulk!
Smokepelt: I'm so sorry!
The dog threw the she-cat around, i can't let her die!
I ran after it, but Branchleaf didn't look so good.. But they looked happy at least.
Branchleaf: It's alright, just don't let Smokeclan fall..
Smokeclan?
SMOKECLAN!?
I never wanted to truly make a clan! Just a save haven!

A. Make a dog-proof border.
B. Start hunting. It's gonna be Leaf-bare soon.
C. Start fighting, make you fierce compared to the rogues!
D. Recruit cats.

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

D

[Wurt the Merm]

Smokepelt darted back to the new camp, phew.. He didn't smell anything burning here! He approached Nettlestorm, his sister.

Nettlestorm: you alright there Smoke-boy?
Smokepelt nodded.
Smokepelt: Yes, but who are these new cats? There's a cat in the herb den as well!
Nettlestorm: Well they wanted to join.. so i let them! Tho we better get more prey for all the cats.
Smokepelt nodded. And rushed over to Brightclaw, who had made himself comfy under a tree.

The smoke-ghost cat ran off to the orange cat.
Brightclaw: Thank you so much! I think i saw you before, you were apart of the rogue group?
Smokepelt purred in happiness.
Smokepelt: Yes! I mean, the forest were either the rogues or other rogues.
Brightclaw nodded.
Brightclaw: Knew i recognized you! I was Brightpaw. You were so mean back then!
They laughed together, the toms needed to know what to do next tho.
A. Get herbs.
B. Get prey.
C. Get cats.
D. Make a dog-proof border.

[Silverfeather24]

D

[Wurt the Merm]

I went with the new medicine cat, Dovestep to collect herbs and make the dog-proof border. As i couldn't contact Starclan but she could. Tho we don't have a lot. We need Goldenrod specially, she almost died on the way! We were fighting the survivors of the fire. Why did they want to kill us?


We returned with Goldenrod and a few brambles, which i used for the outside edges of camp to make them more damage-proof.. Something peculiar has happened tho.

Starclan has warned me about nothing and a sickness has spread, luckily we isolated ourselves. No cat has died.

A. Continue the border.
B. Have a relationship with his cats.
C. Hunt, there won't be prey in Leaf-bare.

[jaymoon]

C, he can continue the border later.

[Wurt the Merm]

I MADE A MISTAKE

So i may have tried to follow Spottedleaf's Multiple save files tutorial and i uhm..

I DID IT WRONG.

Which resulted in my loosing TWO SAVES. (I'm not blaming Spottedleaf, i'm blaming myself for not realizing sooner.)

Which means Thistletuft's Trial will either have to be cancelled or revived, which will take a while because i need to get like 12 cats back with the exact same name and pelts, and to not cause confusion wait for the same season, for The Rise of Smokeclan, i may continue it as normally without screenshots, but i will leave a vote so you guys can decide.