Realistic Attempt 1000000 has successed?

[Toffee]

Ahh I can't draw on computer anymore but paper is okeh ;o
Is this good? cx ^{thecollarfailed}

[Hollylight]

That's really good! May I suggest some things you're missing/ could improve on?

1. You're missing shading for the inside of the ears, as well as the ear fur. A little bit of light shines through the ear, but I haven't been able to figure out how to get that effect yet, so I recommend going with shadows, it still looks realistic :)

2. Whiskers! You do have the "freckles" the whiskers grow out of, but I recommend either (A.) Going in with a good mold-able eraser, and doing the whiskers with that, or (B.) Taking a pencil and drawing in the whiskers. A 4H pencil works best, if you have one. If you think you can get the right effect, also try the whiskers that appear near the cat's ears.

3. Get rid of lines :) I know's it's hard to resist the temptation of drawing in lines(I'm still guilty of drawing lines most of the time X3), but no lines makes the drawing look more realistic. There aren't any lines on real things, sadly ;) You could also work on fur direction, this tutorial has helped me many times: www.youtube.com/watch?v=xx6wBLkMCkI

4. I think you did really well on that collar! ^.^ The only thing I'm going to comment on there is the heart. I'm assuming it's made of metal, most collar chip-things are. Just do a bit of shading, and then you're golden! ;3

Your drawing is beautiful, by the way! Do you own a cat?

[Toffee]

Aug 14, 2015 11:49:16 GMT -5 Hollylight said:

That's really good! May I suggest some things you're missing/ could improve on?

1. You're missing shading for the inside of the ears, as well as the ear fur. A little bit of light shines through the ear, but I haven't been able to figure out how to get that effect yet, so I recommend going with shadows, it still looks realistic

2. Whiskers! You do have the "freckles" the whiskers grow out of, but I recommend either (A.) Going in with a good mold-able eraser, and doing the whiskers with that, or (B.) Taking a pencil and drawing in the whiskers. A 4H pencil works best, if you have one. If you think you can get the right effect, also try the whiskers that appear near the cat's ears.

3. Get rid of lines I know's it's hard to resist the temptation of drawing in lines(I'm still guilty of drawing lines most of the time X3), but no lines makes the drawing look more realistic. There aren't any lines on real things, sadly You could also work on fur direction, this tutorial has helped me many times: www.youtube.com/watch?v=xx6wBLkMCkI

4. I think you did really well on that collar! ^.^ The only thing I'm going to comment on there is the heart. I'm assuming it's made of metal, most collar chip-things are. Just do a bit of shading, and then you're golden! ;3

Your drawing is beautiful, by the way! Do you own a cat?

Thanks ^^ I'm going to try these c:
And yesh, I do own a cat.