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Post by Adderleap loves Cookies on Aug 20, 2015 10:29:51 GMT -5
Ok so hi!
umm you saw the title so just a few rules and then yah
Rules!
.Sorry if i am to harsh or mean
.You may use your own form
. please don't write any thing in red because that is what i will use.
Form
Name:
future names:
Clan:
Age(in moons);
personality:
looks:
skills:
weaknesses:
history:
Family:
other:
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Post by Pebbles on Aug 20, 2015 10:33:57 GMT -5
Name:Mousepaw
future names: mousetail
Clan:Thunderclan
Age(in moons);24
personality:friendly,helpful,kind
looks: light ginger with blue eyes
skills: hunting
weaknesses: swimming
history: she gets atacked by a fox and ges a broken leg
Family: firestar,Squrillelflight,leafpool,Sandstorm
other:nah
(i stalk you)
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Post by Adderleap loves Cookies on Aug 20, 2015 10:39:45 GMT -5
Name:Mousepaw
Ok nice name good start
future names: mousetail
Ok
Clan:Thunderclan
i honestly dont go for Thunderclan or Shadowclan cause of yah know the good and evil stuff
Age(in moons);24
nice age for a warrior
personality:friendly,helpful,kind
any bad stuff to balance it out?
looks: light ginger with blue eyes
unless your going for her size ginger doesn't work for the name mouse
skills: hunting
k
weaknesses: swimming
[font color="ee3000"most thunderclan cant swim that well[/font]
history: she gets atacked by a fox and ges a broken leg
when? how? why? with who? very unworked and bland
Family: firestar,Squrillelflight,leafpool,Sandstorm
umm why? just why? there must be a good reason for this
other:nah
(i stalk you)
uhh ok
need alot of work in the history bit and i suggest you change her family (it is a she right?)
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Post by Jadestone on Aug 20, 2015 11:55:39 GMT -5
Name: Darkkit
Future names: Darkpaw, Darkheart
Clan: ShadowClan
Age(in moons): 11 1/2 moons at exile. 23 moons when became mate to Blood. 34 When she had her kits. 55 When she became leader of BloodClan. 126 At death. Murdered by Blood and Grassstar through Evilspirit.
Personality: She is kind, loyal, understanding, and loving. She really doesn't live up to her name, but at times she can be distant, snappy, harsh, and a bit too quick to fight.
Looks: A pure black she-cat with dark amber eyes.
Skills/Weaknesses: She is a great fighter, but not as good hunter. She is too quick to let cats get to her sometimes and may lash out. She isn't good at tracking or swimming, but amazing at climbing and sneaking up on other creatures.
History: Very long and complicated. So far I am half way done with chapter two.
Family: Orangeblossom(Aunt and adopted mother), Amberstar(Aunt), Sunstar(Half sister), Adderbark(Father), Darkwhisker(Mother), Stormheart, Tinyfoot, Evilspirit,(Daughters. You can blame her mate for Evilspirit) Raven/Crowscar and Littleclaw(Sons. Again, Blood's doing with the names) Blood(Mate). Halfpaw(Past mate). Fawn/Fawnwhisper, Cherry/Wiseheart, Night(Grand-daughters) Sparrow/Sparrowstripe, Coal/Shadowpelt(Grand-sons)
Other: Not all of this is official. I may change some things in my book.
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Post by Error on Aug 21, 2015 7:09:28 GMT -5
NOTE: I'm currently making a story and if I need to change some bits about Freezingstar I wont mind. It's just her I'm worried about since she's the main character of the story. Btw it's animated :3. Some elements will be considered "Super natural." Due to CloudClan only having cats that can literally fly.
Name: Freezingstar
past names: Freezingkit, Freeze, Freezingpaw, Freezingpelt
Clan: First was LightningClan then she became a Loner then she moved to IceClan then she moved to CloudClan.
Age(in moons); 60 (Currently)
personality: Freezingstar seems to be a stubborn she-cat who often likes to hang around other cats. She hates loosing her friends and would die for them when she protects them. She cares for her clan deeply.
looks: White she-cat with blue-grey stripes (Like a Russian blue's blue fur btw) and turquoise eyes. Is often seen with wings after going into a mysterious cave.
skills: Excellent Hunter, decent fighter, agile.
weaknesses: She can trip up easily and breaks down if she sees one of her friends dead.
history: (I'ma keep this short) Alright so Freezingkit got kidnapped by some fox some cat fought it and looked after Freezingkit and became Freeze. Later her and her kithood friend went hunting one day and Freeze got attack by a IceClan warrior. The IceClan deputy, Fullmoon stops the two fighting and offers Freeze to join the clan. Freeze accepts the offer but asked if her friend could join too. Fullmoon agrees to this and then Freeze joins IceClan. Freeze asked Icestar (IceClan's leader) if it was fine to change her name back to Freezing so she could take the name Freezingpaw. Icestar asked her why and Freeze told her that she remembered she was in a clan a long time ago but she couldn't remember which clan nor what her mother looked like. All she remember was her name. Icestar understood the newly apprentice and called for a meeting shortly after her friend taking the name Blackpaw and herself taking the name Freezingpaw. (I'm not going to say anything else it'll ruin the story)
Family: Blizzardstar (Mother) Blazestar (Was Blazestrike when Freezingstar was born and current LightningClan leader at the start) (Father) Mudstar (Becomes leader of IceClan later on) (Brother) Berrystar (Is current LightningClan deputy at the start) (Brother) Highstar (Is not mentioned in FSS) (Aunt) Desertstar (Same as Highstar not mentioned) (Uncle) Heatstar (Not mentioned again) (Uncle) Bleakstar (Again not mentioned) (Cousin)
Other: Their family line has been a family line of leaders for moons.
And for the age I literally just looked up on google on how long cats normally live so yeah...
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Post by 🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄 on Aug 21, 2015 8:57:57 GMT -5
Name:Patchclaw
future names: Patchstar
Clan: Used to be GarlicClan, but is now LynxClan (First leader was Lynxstar)
Age(in moons); 32 moond
personality: Kind of quiet, usually pretty dull but can over react fromm time to time. Brave
looks: A calico of mostly black and orange, about 40℅ black and white 20℅ orange and the orange is very light and has blue eyes I believe, I will edit if itse wrong.
skills: fighting
weaknesses: running and diplomatic skills.
history: was the deputy of GarlicClan but ShadowClan destroyed it, now is going to lead LynxClan. (StarClan 's mercychchallenge)
Family: dead
Other: nope
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Post by Adderleap loves Cookies on Aug 22, 2015 8:01:42 GMT -5
i am so anoyed i did one for each of you but i accedently deleated it!!!!
i'll redo it when i am next on
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Post by Error on Aug 22, 2015 14:30:16 GMT -5
Alright
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pppeeeaaaccceee.