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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2016 21:46:51 GMT -5
[b style="font-size:x-large;"WildClan [/b] [/font] Hello, this is an upcoming game I'm making with RPG Maker vx ace lite(me and ginger are being very flexible right here). Also, this will never be completed cause I MIGHT combine with alligned prophecies, which I haven't got rpg maker mv yet, but really I hope you guys will be able to try out 'the demo' when I release the demo.
I have some sprites right here:
I have 3 areas done. Meadowclan camp, near camp, and meadowclan territory. Hope you guys will help me with faces.
Checklist:
[]: Faces (Angry, Sad, Proud, Agressive, and Normal/Happy)
[]: All maps done
[]: Enough events and quests.
[]: Battles?
[]: Training Hollow 
Hope you guys join iiin.[/font][/div] |
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Post by C H I Y O on Jan 23, 2016 12:58:46 GMT -5
I could try to help with faces. I'm no master artist, but I think I do great as I am. My art is usually put here. (I've recently begun drawing anime faces/hairstyles, I just haven't colored them yet.) |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 23, 2016 13:08:34 GMT -5
I looked at your art, but I don't see many warrior cat art, so I cna't accept you without enough examples :/
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Post by Deleted on Jan 23, 2016 22:51:14 GMT -5
sure? I guess...
hope you guys like the game, I'm gonna get screenshots of other maps. Hope you like <3
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2016 20:05:01 GMT -5
CHU CAN TEST NERB
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gozoo
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Post by gozoo on Jan 25, 2016 20:00:26 GMT -5
The white is kind of hard to read (I know you can read it by highlighting the text, but just saying). Looks cute and reminiscent of Pokemon in terms of the battles. I like the recolors. The walk animations are nice and fluid. The teleportation is cool. The shadows and colors of the background are nice.
I see minor grammatical issues:
0:52 "Your" should be "You're", and it should be "MeadowClan doesn't", not "don't", since MeadowClan is actually just a singular noun.
1:21 "I'm med app" should be "I'm the med(icine) app(rentice)", and it should be "Do you need to be healed?", not, "Do you need healed?"
1:28 "your" should be "you're"
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2016 20:23:31 GMT -5
you don't have to point it out, I would've fixed it later on. This isn't even complete :/ also ginger typed most of it
EDIT:
Also, the med app is suppose to be like that. It's pretty much how ginger says medicine cat as.
annddd I'm trying to work on the maps first then most of the quests and talking sooo
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