Post by Rnouki on Jan 29, 2016 22:48:50 GMT -5
What Makes A Good Warrior Cat?
I was unsure where to put this (here or roleplaying), so I put it here, since I felt it made more sense.
Trying to keep my personal opinions out of this as much as possible
Step 1:
Looking at popular warriors (both good and bad)
I'll look at traits and points of interest, and possibly more. Development will come later.
Firestar:
Good traits (personalitywise): Firestar is seen as bighearted, brave and speaks out for what he believes is right.
Points of interest: He was one of the first cats in a long time, to my knowledge, to have joined a clan after being a kittypet; Tigerstar; many prophecies; Skyclan
Appearance: a fiery orange tabby with green eyes, not very complex
Good or bad?: Good
Brambleclaw/star:
Good traits (personalitywise): brave, independent, has a strong sense of moral and speaks out for what he believes is right.
Points of interest: He is Tigerstar's son
Appearance: A brown tabby with amber eyes, like his father, not very complex
Good or bad?: Good
Squirrelflight:
Good traits (personalitywise): brave, independent, fierce, loving, has a strong sense of moral and speaks out for what she believes is right.
Points of interest: is Firestar's daughter, Brambleclaw/star's mate, Ashfur nothing more about him will be said
Appearance: a fiery orange (tabby?) with one white paw and green eyes
Good or bad?: Good
Sandstorm:
Good traits (personalitywise): brave, independent, fierce, loyal and speaks out for what she believes is right.
Points of interest: is Firestar's mate, Squirrelflight and Leafpool's mother
Appearance: pale ginger she-cat with almost non-visible darker stripes
Good or bad?: Good
Leafpool:
Good traits (personalitywise): brave, loving, smart
Points of interest: Crowfeather, Mother of Jayfeather and Lionblaze
Appearance: Pale brown tabby, not very complex
Good or bad?: Good
Graystripe:
Good traits (personalitywise): brave, loving, smart
Points of interest: Silverstream, Firestar's best friend, Firestar's second deputy, Millie, captured by twolegs
Appearance: gray longhaired tom with a darker stripe of fur
Good or bad?: Good
Step 2:
Looking at their development (part 1) and similarities (part 2).
Part 1
Development is usually important in a character. Let's see the selected characters' developments. I won't go into too much detail however, mostly just look at how they began and how they ended.
Firestar:
Started as a disobedient ex-kittypet apprentice
-Recreated skyclan
-Killed scourge
-Experience
Ended as a fiercely loyal, wise leader
Brambleclaw:
Started as, well, umm.. I'm not sure.. I guess I forgot.. he probably wasn't amazingly special at the time though
-journey
-becomes deputy
-training from tigerstar
-hawkfrost
-new territory
-firestar's death
Ended as a leader, but is quite early in his leadership, which makes it quite difficult to judge his ''end character'' without my opinion
Squirrelflight;
Started as an insolent, annoying, stubborn apprentice
-journey
-new territory
-leafpool and crowfeather
-ashfur
-hollyleaf
Became a strong, brave, loyal warrior
Sandstorm:
Started as a bully to Firestar
-got to know him
-saved by firestar
-firestar
-skyclan
-journey
-new territory
Ended as a brave, loving, loyal mate and loyal warrior
Leafpool
Began as a young, smart apprentice
-squirrelflight goes on journey
-new territory
-crowfeather
-kits
-hollyleaf
Ended as a wise, 'tragic' cat
Graystripe
Began as a friendly, young, eager apprentice
-meets firestar
-became a warrior
-silverstream
-captured by twolegs
-millie
-made it to clans
Ended as a wise, loving cat
part 2
I've noticed a lot of similarities between the selected characters... let's see them.
- Bravery
- Independence
- Loving
- Speaks out for what is right
- Non-Mary Sue/Gary Stu
- LOTS of development
- INTERESTING
- Good
- Simple looks, with maybe one or two defining traits
Step 3
poll evidence (still being taken)
So far the most liked characteristics are, in order:
- Intelligence, bravery, Loyalty
- strength, agility
- Obedience, Fighting skill, hunting skill, speed
- Disobedience (like Firestar feeding Riverclan)
Step 4
traits from research/best traits (still being collected as poll results change)
Brave, independent, loving, speaks out for what's right, LOTS of development, interesting, Intelligence, Simple looks (with maybe one or two defining traits)