Rainclan O/A

[Stormmmmstar]

Welcome to Rainclan. Where the rains are as strong as a river, and as hard as a waterfall. Im Stormstar, the one running this clan. Why dont i tell ya about where we live? We live near a large oak forest, in a quite marshy area. Whole fields of horsetail grow here. In the oak forest you can find most of the other herbs. Including Deathberrys. So be very careful. Our dens kinda look like twoleg dens, and are on stilts just incase it floods. We have the usual classes like apprentice, warrior, and medicine cats. But we also have another rank, the Warner rank. They go by Whitereed lake and see if the water levels rise or fall at all. If they are rising too high, the Warner will warn the entire clan about it so we can be prepared. And if they fall too low,(which they dont that often) The Warner will tell us so we can stock up on water. Its quite useful in a unpredictable climate like this one. Our prey here are fish, voles, ducks, and the occasional mouse. I hope you love this clan, and have fun!

[I don’t know what I’m doing]

Username: diamondtstar84
Cat name: Duskpaw
Rank: Apprentice
Age: 9 moons old
Appearance: Duskpaw is a very dark brown fur, making him almost look black. His eyes are green, and his nose is black.
Personality: Duskpaw, is a quiet, shy, and nervous cat. He is always in the background, and tries to avoid everyone. His best friend is his sister, but he is brave enough to talk to some cats. He is determined to be there friend. He likes looking at Dusks, and Dawns. He imitates about what’s beyond the territory, up on the sky. He is a daydreamer, and he doesn’t fight. He likes hunting more, since he likes making up stories of the prey’s life. He will only fight if forced or needed.
Other: Duskpaw is straight.

[Stormmmmstar]

Cool, cool. Im gonna make a character sheet for 2 characters.

[Deleted]

Um- I'm sorry but can you give more information? I can join after that.
(The characters, the rules, More information of the new rank, Plot information, etc.)

[Stormmmmstar]

Oh! Sure! What would you like to know about first?

[Deleted]

More information of the clan, please.
(You could also add information of the new role on this, and the plot.)
Please try to make it very detailed. I am suffering problems with my plots, trying to get some more information to show all of the things inside the rp, so if possible please make it detailed.

[Stormmmmstar]

K, so about the Warner rank. Once apprentices become warriors, they will have to wait at least 5 moons to volunteer for the Warner rank. The Warner rank warns about water levels rising and lowering. If the water levels raise 1 meter above the normal water level, they will tell the cats to prepare for a flood. And if they lower 1 meter, the warner will tell the cats to stock up on water, a drought could come.

[Stormmmmstar]

And about the lore. Stormstar was called Stormberry before she was kicked out of Riverclan, for having kits while she was a medicine cat. Once she was kiked out, she traveled far to avoid any trouble with other clans. She found a old twoleg place near a marsh and a forest. She went in there and named her kits Specklekit And Rustkit. Once they were six moons old, she taught them for another six moons, about how to catch prey, and about herbs and how to use them. She gave them their warrior names, Being Rustbrook, And Specklepool. (AND YES. This is the same Rustbrook in warrior clan. he just doesnt have a good memory of Stormstar.) And they left to become warriors, hopefully finding a good clan. Once they became warriors, Stormberry decided to make a rouge camp! Maybe she could find others in the same situation as her. She set up the huts, made the ranks, and disscussed with other cats, what the name of the clan should be. They unanimously decided Rainclan. Where the rains are as strong as a river, and as hard as a waterfall.

[Deleted]

Alright!

[Stormmmmstar]

I should make a charater sheet soon, shouldnt i?

[Stormmmmstar]

Username: Stormmmmstar
Cat name: Stormstar
Rank: Leader of Rainclan
Age: 24 moons
Appearance: A mainly black slightly fluffy cat, with a dark gray tipped tail and dark gray underbelly, with piercing grass green eyes.
Personality: A sweet spunky cat, with slight anger issues. Even with those anger issues, shes a tough nut to crack. But when she does crack, um.... Lets just say shes not afraid to get some other clans blood on her paws

[Stormmmmstar]

Will you join the rp Sleepyowl?

[leafsongofthunderclan]

Username: leafsongofthunderclan
Cat Name: Sorrel (I can change her name to a warrior name)
Rank: Warrior
Age: 18 moons
Appearance: A copper coloured she-cat with green-blue eyes
Personality: Quiet and unchallenging, Sorrel respects Stormstar. Sorrel is normally seen by the medicine cat den, trying to ask for something that she’s told no one about.

[★Echobrook the Reindeer★]

You might want to raise Stormstars age. If she’s had kits that are now fully grown warriors but she’s 24 moons, that would mean she had her kits at 12 moons. Which would mean she got pregnant at 9 moons. Now if you consider the time it takes to develop a fully functional clan (having traveled far enough ((with kits)) to make a new clan, building dens, learning about how the water rises and floods, getting enough cats to become warriors for her, etc. ), there’s no way Stormstar could’ve done that in the span of 9 months you’re leaving her with. If she did do it in that 9 months, then Stormstar would’ve been pregnant literally when she was born, lol.

I’d recommend making either an entirely new leader or making Stormstar much older.

[Stormmmmstar]

Oh oki! So how bout 48 moons.