Ahhhh I love these (::: Cat's name: Troutheart Gender: she-cat Physical appearance, notable scars: A slightly larger than average (for a she-cat) tortoiseshell with white paws and golden eyes. She is well muscled and has a stubbed tail from a birth defect. Skills/Traits/Personality: Troutheart is often seen as a nosy and gossiping she-cat. Because of her talkative nature, she is not afraid to speak out for herself in an injustice. She has her mind set on power and is quite the cat to be in that position. This makes many allies but just as many enemies. Being able to speak her mind, she is looked at as a prissy wanna-be leader. Her major skills include fighting (both verbally and physically) and swimming. Her hunting skills are average and she can climb trees if needed but she is a very down to earth cat and likes to be on the ground at most times. History: n/a Family: n/a Other: n/a
Post by ϟ∞ѕтσиє¢ℓαω∞ϟ on Jul 4, 2015 11:05:36 GMT -5
Cat's name: Stoneclaw Gender: she-cat Physical appearance, notable scars: notch in right ear. You know what she looks like XD Skills/Traits/Personality: Stoneclaw is a great fighter but is also an average hunter. She can swim because of her clan (my clan ouo) which she was born into. She is kind to others in her clan but is hostile to others that are not. She is wise beyond her age and would make a good leader someday. But, her history is rather tragic and she wishes to not talk about it most of the time. History: Stoneclaw was born into MoonClan (ya I know. Not traditional) but her mother was an apprentice and not many cats would accept her. Her mother, Sunpaw (also not traditional, I know XD), left with her but not with her brother, Blackkit because her father, Tigerheart, wished to rise him in the clan. She was a loner with her mother until she reached the age of six moon because she had a deal with Whitestar that she would take her kit back and stay until she wished to leave. When she was a warrior, her brother, now Blacktail, lead a band of rogues into the camp and he killed Whitestar and the deputy. (After that she bacame leader but...) Family: Sunspots(mother), Tigerheart(father), Blacktail(brother) Other: I know her mom or her clan arn't traditional XD beech
Last Edit: Jul 5, 2015 16:15:18 GMT -5 by ϟ∞ѕтσиє¢ℓαω∞ϟ
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Post by ☀ Streampool ☀ on Jul 5, 2015 16:02:47 GMT -5
Cat's name: Sagestep Gender: Female Physical appearance, notable scars: Sagestep is a gray-furred, bushy cat with dark amber eyes. She has one scar across her shoulder. Skills/Traits/Personality: Sagestep is blunt and sarcastic. She is usually quiet, but if given the chance to speak she will take it eagerly. She has a sort of barrier around herself, she can seem distant and cold to the passing acquaintance. However if you break through that barrier she is a really compassionate and loyal cat. She finds a lot of flaws with herself and tries to move past them, but can't seem too. History: Sagestep was born as the only cat in her litter. Her mother never got around to having more kits, so Sagekit felt very lonely at times. She did make friends with another cat called Eaglekit, but never really had any romantic feelings for him. They eventually stopped being friend when he tried to make a move on her on the day she was to become a warrior. She doesn't speak about him much now that they have parted ways. Because of this, she generally mistrusts others and often remarks about how much she doesn't want kits. Despite this, she does like kittens. Just not taking care of them. As an apprentice, Sagepaw was still quite sullen and lonely. She was thrust in the middle of a large group of cats she had to interact with daily, most younger than her. Sagepaw didn't really try to make friends with any of them, preferring to be in the background, letting others shine. That didn't work out very well, considering her aptitude for hunting. On the outside, she shook off the praise, but on the inside, she actually kind of enjoyed it. The day she became a warrior, Eaglepaw, also about to become a warrior as well, tried to tell her that he had a crush on her. Sagepaw really wasn't interested in a relationship, much less with her best friend. She rejected him instantly, and after a small argument they parted ways to go to their ceremony. Angry and disgusted, Sagestep hardly listened when she was given her new name. Eaglepaw became Eaglefur. She became Sagestep. After Eaglefur's rejection, he turned into a bully, taunting Sagestep for her quiet demeanor and sarcastic wit. Sagestep, on the outside, seemed unaffected, but he affected her deep on the inside. Even as a senior warrior, Sagestep was insecure, never finding a way to move on. She found fault with herself at every turn. Multiple failures to get an apprentice didn't help either.
(I didn't mean to write a whole story, haha c:) Family: Mother: Grayflower Father: Smokeheart Other:
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Post by 🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄 on Aug 29, 2015 15:38:27 GMT -5
I know, but its not locked! Cat's name: Potatoheart Gender: male Physical appearance, notable scars: A light brown pelt with black strips and spots all over, yellow eyes and average size. Skills/Traits/Personality: about average in everything except healing and swimming, or taking care of kits which he can't do. He has a good sense of morals, and always folows the warrior code, even if it can be bad for him. History:na Family:na Other: Lives by potato field. beech
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Name: Trout- Trout would denote a cat with a tortoiseshell pelt or a brown dappled coat, which your cat has (tortoiseshell). They also usually have orange, or yellow eyes, though green is not out of the question. So I'd say that your cat fits the Trout- suffix pretty well. If I had to suggest another prefix, Kestrel- might work, though I'm unsure of what colors your tortie dominantly is, so I can't say for sure.
The suffix heart- usually stands for a cat with "a strong sense of belief in themselves and an idealistic notion of right and wrong". None of this traits are really listed in your description of her, and in my opinion, if you're going to choose a personality one, this part of their personality must be pretty dominant. So I'm going to suggest either -claw or -stream as she's listed as both a fighter and a swimmer, however if you know that she's better at one over the other, then choose that one. Note that personality suffixes are usually chosen when a skill suffix isn't fitting.
Appearance: All seems good here. I like the fact that you described her as "larger than average" because it sort of makes her seem like less of a Mary-Sue than other characters. Note that yellow would also be a good eye color, because yellow appears to be the most common color among tortoiseshell cats. (Don't quote me on that. aha)
History: Can't really offer advice, as there's nothing here!
Summary: In summary, Troutclaw/stream would probably fit this cat better, as it would appear that her personality isn't fitting for the prefix heart-. ----
Name: Stone- usually denotes a plain gray cat, however I'm aware that Stoneclaw has a gray tabby pelt, so I don't think that this prefix would fit her. Rain- or Cinder- might fit her better as they both denote a gray tabby (well Rain- denotes a patterned cat, but tabby is a pattern, so that one is fairly vague).
-Claw is a good suffix for her, though I'd also recommend -pelt or -fur due to her not seeming to have anything else that she's really good at. (Other than swimming, though since she lives in a Clan that can swim well, then she'd have to be above average to denote the -stream suffix,)
Appearance: Purple eyes. Mate, this makes absolutely no sense. Cats can't have purple eyes, please change. I'd recommend gold, copper or amber if you want it to be realistic, but I suppose that greens or blues would be possible just not probable.
History: As a note: MoonClan makes me cringe, but I'm not here to judge that or Sunpaw.
I think it's highly unlikely that a Clan wouldn't accept a cat just because they were expecting kits at a young age. In fact, I think if they'd not accept anyone, it would be Tigerheart. But otherwise, a Clan would just be happy that there were going to be new kits, as in most cases, kits are a blessing for a Clan, no matter who the mother or father is.
Something else that doesn't really make that much sense is this: Why would Tigerheart only want Blackkit? Because he's a male. Well, I don't think in the cat universe that your gender would matter much? I mean, female cats could be great warriors, like males, so I don't think it would matter much. If it's that the mother refused to leave Stonekit, then that wouldn't make sense either, because it would be like "Why did she want to keep Stonekit but not Blackkit?". I assume it's the first one, that Tigerheart only wanted Blackkit and not Stonekit but it doesn't make much sense, in my opinion.
Also, why would Whitestar only accept her after she's six moons old? It's not like she'll have changed, or have been born to a different mother between that time. This doesn't make much sense either (What doesn't make sense either is, if this Clan happened to be extremely disapproving of everything, and they happened to not approve of Stonekit or Blackkit and their mother, why their opinion of them changed? And why would they make a cat they disapproved of deputy, and eventually leader?) Of course, there could be a reason for this, it just needs a bit of explaining.
Summary: Rainpelt/fur/claw or Cinderpelt/fur/claw would probably be a better name for this cat. The eye color would need to be changed. Also, the history would need to be changed or at least explained a little better, because most of it didn't make much sense, or was vague, in my opinion. ----- ☀ Streampool ☀ Here you go after a long wait!
--- Name: Sage- is a traditional prefix that denotes a pale gray cat. You say that the cat is gray-furred, so this would seem to fit well. Also the eye color matches very well, so it works as well. Gray- or Cinder- might work as well, as they'd denote a sort of darker gray color, rather than a lighter gray one.
-step, however, in this context, is not traditional. The prefix, usually, has to be an animal name, as it means that this cat "steps like this animal". For example, Foxstep steps like a fox, and since a cat can't step like sage (not an animal), this suffix would not be applicable.
-Storm, -pelt, or -fur might work better. -Storm would denote a dynamic and unpredictable cat, and I kind of got the impression that sometimes this cat's nice, and sometimes this cat is not so nice, so I think -Storm would work here. -Pelt or -fur would be used since this cat doesn't have any skills listed (From what I saw).
Appearance: Gray-furred is good, though vague. Is this cat a tabby or no? Does this cat have any patterns? If they don't, you could always put plain gray-furred to avoid confusion. Otherwise it's all good, though some people would think that dark amber and copper are synonymous, however, I think copper as an eye color has more of a reddish-brown tone to it, than the golden tones in amber.
History: I don't really know if it's likely that cats would become warriors on the same day, as they didn't come from the same litter, but I suppose that it's possible. I haven't read that books in a long time so I actually am not sure about this. If you know for sure, feel free to correct me though, as I'm sure that I could be wrong about this.
One thing though, bullying doesn't typically occur in Clans, honestly. Sure, there are ill-tempered cats such as Mousefur or Darkstripe, but there aren't really any bullies, and if there was, I'd imagine the leader would do something about this. (As well, the bullying probably wouldn't take place over something as trivial as an event that happened when they were apprentices; it would probably be something about the cat coming from a different Clan, being half-Clan, or being an ex-kitty-pet, as these are the things that cats typically disagree on in the books).
Summary: Sagestorm/pelt/fur would work, but Sagestep would not. Also, you might want to take out the part about bullying in your cat's history as bullying is both a sensitive subject for some people, and something that doesn't typically happen in Clan life. (Though I suppose it could happen, it's just not likely). --- 🎄Vegan the Festive Goat🎄 Here ya go! c:
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Name: Oh, dear potatoheart. Oh dear. Okay, where to begin.
Potato- isn't traditional even if this cat lives near a potato farm, as potatoes do not typically grow above ground, and they'd have to be dug up before a cat could see them. The thing they would see though, are the stalks, that are typically green. Also, this topic is vague from the research I did on it, but it would seem that most farms do not just specialize in potatoes.
I would recommend Fawn-, Deer-, or Hazel- as a prefix, as these could all be a light brown cat with some markings on them.
-Heart doesn't really seem applicable for this cat. It's usually assumed by people that -heart is just a strong sense of morals, but it really is a lot more than that. You might try pelt-, fur-, or face- for this cat as they all denote a rather average cat. (Of course, remember, even average cats are important to their Clan!)
Appearance: Not much to comment on; it all seems fairly realistic and accurate. I might describe their coat as a flecked tabby, though without a reference, I can't do that.
History: None listed so nothing to comment on!
Summary: Fawnpelt, Deerfur, or Hazelface (You can change up the suffixes with the prefixes) would fit this cat better.
Cat's name:Leopardheart Gender:She-cat Physical appearance, notable scars: A golden Bengal she cat with an average body. She has a strange heart-like spot on her head, giving her power. She also has green eyes and long fur. Skills/Traits/Personality: Strengths: decent leaper, good at climbing trees, strong attacker, extreme defense due to power. Weaknesses: Somtimes stutters when nervous, kind of weak swimmer, quite slow when running. Personality: a (usually) brave and heartstrong she cat. She is kind and caring, willing to protect anyone from any clan. History:(I'm just gonna summarize this because it's so long) two loners named tabatha-shadow and Sebastian joined river clan since they were about to have kits, in coyote season.... Also, the leader at the time, cloud star, helped them in the past and became a close friend. A few days later, they had 3 kits named moonkit, Silverkit, and Leopardkit (aka, leopardheart) Family:Tabby(kittypet name)/Tabatha shadow(loner/in-clan name)Mother. Status: stayed in clan, killed by a bear while on a patrol. Sebastian : father.status, left clan after tabatha's death, alive. Moonshadow: brother/littermate.Status:Warrior,alive. Silversky: sister/littermate.Status: alive, medicine cat. Other:note that this cat exists in a fan fiction, and the warriors have moved so much, they have ended up in Yellowstone (totallynotweird)
Name: Leopard- a golden cat with any form of brown spots, splotches, or patterns (excluding tabby) on their fur. Essentially, a golden cat with brown. Your cat seems to fit this nicely, as I think that bengal cats have brown spots in their fur. Leopard- seems to be appropriate!
-Heart denotes a cat with a strong sense of belief in themselves and an idealistic notion of right and wrong. I don't really think your cat would deserve the -heart suffix, because you didn't mention anything in your description that would deserve the -heart suffix. Of course, this could be that you just didn't list it, however, I'm just going off of what you put, so I would have no way of knowing.
With that being said, I think that -tail would suit this cat well, as a "tail-" cat would have a good sense of balance. Since you mentioned your cat was good at climbing trees, they would likely need a good sense of balance, so I believe that tail- would work best for this cat.
Appearance: I've never really heard of a golden bengal cat, which appears to be a dilemma. I can't find any evidence that they exist, whilst I can't seem to find any evidence that they don't exist. I know that golden is a shade of ginger, in relation to cat pelt colors, but I can't find any evidence that this shade could occur in bengal cats.
I might just go ahead and describe her as a pale ginger cat, as I was able to find out that this shade exists, however then it might conflict with the Leopard- prefix. For now, I'd leave it as golden bengal, but if I find evidence that it doesn't exist, then I'll let you know.
Post by Rabbitwhisper on Sept 5, 2015 17:13:31 GMT -5
Are you ready... FOR AN INFO DUMP?!
Cat's name: Spottedbriar
Gender: Tom/male
Physical appearance, notable scars: Spottedbriar has clear amber eyes, and a soft velvety nose. He has mainly white fur, with black ears, a black tail and a few black spots on his lower back. He has a longer muzzle and bigger ears. His fur is short and sleek.
Skills/Traits/Personality: Spottedbriar is the sharp tonged, quick witted Tigerstar’s advocate. He enjoys debate, ripping apart personal opinions with raw facts. He can avoid many battles and awkward situations with his smooth tongue and he can’t resist a mental challenge. Being original and creative, any mental challenge is accepted. They’re quick thinking, knowledgeable and with great levels of energy. Spottedbriar may have a smooth tongue, but he is very argumentative, and will fight with every fiber of his body to defend his statement, while being intolerant and insensitive to those he disagrees with. Spottedbriar has no huge advantages, and while he is decent in both fighting and hunting, he favors fighting with his extra sharp claws. He also has slightly worse sight than most cats. He struggles to see smaller objects and can’t see quite as far as others can.
History: He was born into Riverclan, and was raised with kindness. His early life was extremely bland. Things only kicked up when he was around five moons of age. His father died in a savage battle over Sunningrocks. His mother was devastated, and driven to insanity. She shunned her kits and was driven out to prevent harm from coming to any other cat. When he was an apprentice, his mentor was calm, levelheaded and very biased toward something. When he managed to convince her of something else, it filled him with joy, giving him his personality. When he was made a warrior, he was even named after his sharp tongue. During a patrol as a warrior, he stumbled across a rogue. It was then he realized he wanted to see the world, explore and understand more personalities and arguments. He left his clan, and hasn’t looked back.
Family: Mother: Rainfur Blue grey cat with yellow eyes.
Father: Duckclaw Brown tabby with amber eyes.
Littermates: Mousetail Small white tom with yellow eyes.
Other: He is 16 moons old, and has been traveling for two moons.
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Name: Spotted- denotes a tortoiseshell or cat with a dappled pelt. I don't think just because your cat has a few black spots would mean that it deserved the Spotted- prefix, so I'll give you some suggestions that would fit it better.
Mallow-, Frost-, and White- would seem to fit this cat better. Each of these would be a white cat.
-Briar is certainly not traditional. I would suggest -pelt, -fur or -claw for this cat. -Claw would not be applicable if this cat was an average fighter, but you said that he was better at fighting than hunting. -Pelt or -fur would be for an "average" cat.
Appearance: Not much to comment on. A white cat with black spots on the back is probably not common, but I have not found anything that would deem it impossible, so I won't suggest changing it.
History: (I found it interesting that you gave his family traditional names, but not him.) I would suggest taking out the "insanity" word in it, as that could easily offend someone, though it doesn't offend me. I would probably also avoid saying that his life kicked up when his father was killed, as it almost makes it seem like a good thing. Maybe a different word choice would make the history better.
For example, saying the mother was driven to insanity (unless she actually had that mental disorder) could be easily replaced by saying that the mother was driven to acting violent and unpredictable. And instead of saying that his life kicked up, saying that his life was changed when his father was killed, would be better.
Summary: Mallow/Frost/White- would be good prefixes for this cat, and -pelt/fur/claw would be good suffixes.