Post by Deathkill(Savage) on Nov 12, 2015 17:54:42 GMT -5
Cat's name:Fluffytail Gender:female Physical appearance, notable scars:She is a calico she cat with unnerving golden eyes. She has very fluffy fur and white stomach chest neck and chin markings. Her front legs are white up to the knee and her back paws are only socks. Skills/Traits/Personality:She is a happy kind and outgoing well fierce and quick tempered. If looks could kill cats that got her angry should look out! Her unnerving golden glare can burn holes in a pelt. History:She was a kittypet on a farm. When the clans came around she joined them and now lives among them. She came in as a young warrior and now is still a young warrior but a warrior. She was excepted by the clan cats and was frustrated. A cat, Dustytails excepted the she cat and helped train her. The young tom soon fell in love with the calico she cat. He has told her not so long ago and she is still thinking it over. The cats of the clan trust the she cat as she had proven herself on a cold leafbare when she went on extra hunting patrols, even though most she was unsuccessful. Family:AutumnGlow(Mother) Billy(Father)Mint(Kittypet) and Angelpelt(Former kittypet) Other:She's based off of my grandma's cat.
Name: Neither Solar- nor -light are traditional so I shall give you some suggestions. Tiger-, Fire-, or Fox- would work, as they all denote a ginger cat (not too sure what the bright part would be considered, but I imagine a vibrant ginger color rather than an orange color). I suggest Tiger because you said tabby but most ginger prefixes would work in this situation.
For a suffix, -pelt or -fur would probably be best, but I suppose you could use -face too if he was particularly attractive. You didn't mention his skills, or if he has any, so I assume he's a fairly average cat. (Also the other traits you listed for him didn't denote any suffixes). If you would like to elaborate on his character, I may be able to suggest something else! ^^
Appearance: Not much to comment on. I recommend making it a bit more detailed, as the way it is now is fairly simple, but otherwise it is good. ^^
History: I wouldn't necessarily say his history was irregular, since, from what I remember of PineClan, most members grew up as kitty-pets or loners. Otherwise, it's fairly decent, though like most of the form, it was lacking a bit in information and detail.
Summary: Tigerpelt, Firepelt, or Foxpelt would work best, you can pretty much swap any out though (such as Foxfur rather than Foxpelt). Character also needs a bit more detail.
Name: Rose- typically denotes a light ginger cat. While your character has a few patches of it, it must be their dominant fur color in order to deserve the prefix. I would suggest Rat-, Crow-, or Night- for a black cat, though any black-pelted prefixes would probably be best.
For a suffix I would suggest -tail because it represents an "agile cat with a notable sense of balance" and you definitely need balance to be able to climb trees well. I don't feel like -heart would be good given the information you gave me.
Appearance: Not much to comment on tbh. Her appearance is definitely interesting, I always love to see ginger patches on dark cats!
History: I like her history, as it's quite interesting. Though I cringe every time there's a forbidden romance. Also the part about her being a premature child was really interesting as well. You could add a bit more detail about the romance, but otherwise it's all pretty good.
Summary: I personally like Night-tail for this cat, but you can virtually choose any black-pelted prefixes.
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I'll get to the rest of these tomorrow, hopefully!
Post by ḾṎᏨḳḭṈgᏨᾀ℄℄ on Jan 16, 2016 22:59:35 GMT -5
Cat's name: Prefix: Mocking/Misty/Wisp/Ruffle/Flower - Suffix: Call/Heart//Pool/Cloud Gender: Female Physical appearance, notable scars: This she-cat has silvery-blue medium length (a bit long) fur with bright green eyes. Her fur is always ruffled, looking as if something has rubbed her fur the wrong way. Skills/Traits/Personality: This she-cat is very headstrong and believes in her word all the way. However, she has a calm exterior and her green eyes always glimmer with curiosity. She tries to keep a level-head, but sometimes that doesn't work. She is also known to be absent-minded. History: She was born to two long-haired cats, a white tom and a blue she-cat. Her father had green eyes whilst her mother had amber eyes. She had a sibling called Stormpaw who died of malnutrition, as leaf-bare set in right as they turned five moons old, and this one was particularly harsh. He died at eight moons of age. Her parents were always close-watching, but expected the two to take care of themselves as apprentices, even though they still had an unbreakable bond. She lives in RiverClan and was mentored by a tom named Morningtail. (Mockingkit is a possibility because, from the moment she could speak, she'd always coo and repeat whatever anyone around her said, and she still quietly repeats what other cats say if she's comprehending it. Sometimes she'll take bits of conversation and repeat it as well. She also has quite a loud voice, which supports -call.) Family: Whiteheart (sire), Lilypelt (dam), Stormpaw (brother) Other: Attracted to females.
Cat's name: Cometdance Gender: all of them Female Physical appearance, notable scars: black she-cat with purple stripes and matching purple eyes with yellow-ish brown paws and a hot pink swirl on her forehead, also has white flecks. also is very very very tiny and has an hourglass figure and is so skinny and has b00bs was born as Horrifyingkit but her sister Moonkit changed her name to Cometkit because she liked comets. her parents abused her and hated her and threw her out in the snow. her father killed moonkit and killed cometdance but then cometdance was sent back to earth because she was stuck in between starclan and the dark forest and they said "ok b good or bad and when u die again u can come to one of our clans!!!!" Skills/Traits/Personality: Kind, loving, ambitious, malicious, endearing, scary, bad-tempered, understanding, hateful, curious, mysterious, outgoing, caring, affectionate, blood-thirsty, wistful, bright, absent-minded, alert, cheery, and gloomy. She is AMAZING at fighting, hunting, swimming, tracking, climbing, making friends, making enemies, making toms and shecats fall in love, but she is straight because she helped Stargleam deliver the 10 commandments (there's eleven tho) also she cant have babies because starclan tried to make all their kits go in her at once even tho she was a virgin and her body went into overdrive and she cant have kits anymore History: she was born to Maggotdeath and Bloodytoe but they hated her because she had black fur and black cats r bad luck even tho Maggotdeath was black too!!!!! she had a sister moonkit but she got killded by maggotdeath and became evil in the dark forest and got called Badmeanevilkit!!!!!!!!!! when she was an apprentice she was mentored by Leopardstar, Firestar, Bramblestar, Blackstar, Bluestar, Spottedleaf, Cinderpelt, Ashfur, Pinestar, Thunderstar, Windstar, Riverstar, Stargleam, Moonstar, Shadowstar, Canyonstar, Lovestar, Beautifulstar, Cloudmask, Fallen Leaves, Hollyleaf, Mintyheart, Lionblaze, Jayfeather, Half Moon, Clear Sky, Mothwing, & Tallstar!!!! she becam a warrior when she was 3 moons old and leader at 2 moons old! but they still call her cometdance because its prettier than cometstar
Family: All of StarClan and the dark forest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and all of the clans!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Other: Is part rogue, kittypet, WindClan, MoonClan, CanyonClan, RiverClan, ShadowClan, ThunderClan, LoveClan, BeautifulClan, StarClan, Darkforest, LeopardClan, LionClan, & TigerClan <:
Last Edit: Jan 16, 2016 23:43:07 GMT -5 by ḾṎᏨḳḭṈgᏨᾀ℄℄: had 2 troll u
Post by Brightclaw on Apr 27, 2016 17:12:53 GMT -5
Cat's name: Lionstep/cloud Gender: male Physical appearance, notable scars: he has a lithe build and a orange pelt, his fur is fairly long and he has a long scar on his shoulder. his eye colour is hazel. Is fairly old Skills/Traits/Personality: He is very swift and a good hunter, but not the best at fighting. He is stoic and silent, if he speaks its in a very quiet tone. He is very sweet to those he loves but hardly even speaks to those he does not respect. History: Lionstep has served as a good warrior for most of his life, and never really thought there was much use in small talk. Being born into a very traditionalist family he was taught early on to respect his elders and leader. When he met his mate Ashflower/heart, he hardly spoke with her, yet she tried her hardest to get his attention. Once she gained his respect they grew closer than most could believe. Family: N/A other than Ashflower/heart and maybe kits Other:
Cat's name: Ashflower/heart Gender: female Physical appearance, notable scars: she has a gray pelt with orange eyes, one of her ears is shredded from a previous battle. Sturdily built she has short fur with faint tabby markings. Skills/Traits/Personality: She is a good fighter with a valiant spirit, with a strong sense of black and white when it comes to difficult decisions. When she isn't fight she is slightly clumsy on her paws. Ashflower/heart tends to be silly and sweet. often trying to cheer up others or support friends in their time of need. Upon meeting Lionstep/cloud she was irritated by his seemingly aloof attitude and made it her mission to get a reaction out of him. History: N/A working on that Family:Lionstep Other:N/A
Last Edit: Apr 27, 2016 17:15:34 GMT -5 by Brightclaw
hi hi idk if this is still going but if it is i dont want u to feel rushed to try to grade this one :p
note: i actually got wren's physical description from an adoptable i got on dA that i had never really come up with anything for her yet :'D
Cat's Name: Wrenwhisker Gender: She-cat Physical appearance, notable scars: Wrenwhisker is a fairly small brown tabby with long, fluffy fur and a small nick on her ear. Her base colour is a warm light brown colour with darker brown stripes going from her head to the tip of her tail and on her front paws, and a cream colour on her face, chest, stomach, the bottom of her tail, and back paws. She has dull green eyes.
Skills/Traits/Personality: Wrenwhisker is extremely good at hunting but is rather average in battles. She is also good at sneaking around due to her small build, which sometimes allows her to get into some mischief. Wrenwhisker isn't quick to trust despite her fun and cool atmosphere, and she also isn't a touchy-feely kind of cat. She loves to have fun, however, and it can get her into some odd situations. She likes being around other cats, even if she doesn't really enjoy any touching or other shows of affection/friendship. She can be a bit odd sometimes, however, and if you catch her alone you might hear her mumbling some random nonsense to herself. Once you have her trust, however, you can usually learn what she's rambling about- If you're okay with sitting for hours to listen to her. Despite being rather average at fighting, She's extremely quick to temper and tends to quarrel a lot with the other warriors, whether it be a friendly bout or an angry tussle. If it weren't for her hunting skills, Her prefix might've been -storm instead for her quick to change mood, temper, and the other oddities about her personality. History: Wrenwhisker doesn't talk about her past that often and tries to keep it that way. She came to her clan at about 7 moons old, smelling of crow food and the thunder path, and when the leader gave her the option to stay, she didn't take that long to decide she wanted to. She doesn't really like when cats try to pry about it, but she does her best to keep cool about it. When she does tell any cat about her story, it's the only thing she tries to water down and make quick, and she usually only tells them about the fact that she was a stray and that her mother abandoned her due to her small size. Family: She doesn't talk too often about her mother, but some cat's have heard her mumbling about her two siblings, even though she herself doesn't even remember their names. Other: Wrenwhisker doesn't really believe too strongly in StarClan, but it wouldn't take too much to convince her that it does exist. The things that she rambles about tends to be her beliefs on... well, anything. It could be from her spiritual beliefs about StarClan and the afterlife, or be as simple as what she wants to achieve or do that day.